All Comments on 'Deep Penetration'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

i luv drugging stories

AlhazredAlhazredover 16 years ago
*yawn*

The fact that you couldn't even come up with a name for your main character made it so I couldn't even stay interested past the first paragraph. If you don't care enough about your own characters to even name them, then don't expect your readers to care much about your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wow, that story is bad.

Talk about a waste of time, right there is a few minutes that I'll never see again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A psychopath?

Couldn't help wondering whether the author of this story is a psychpath who cares not one wit how his aunt might feel.Poorly written as well! Ugh!

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