by oedipus_complex
The fact that you couldn't even come up with a name for your main character made it so I couldn't even stay interested past the first paragraph. If you don't care enough about your own characters to even name them, then don't expect your readers to care much about your story.
Talk about a waste of time, right there is a few minutes that I'll never see again.
Couldn't help wondering whether the author of this story is a psychpath who cares not one wit how his aunt might feel.Poorly written as well! Ugh!