Another fine little story ,you must have a very fertile mind .Well Done.
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Anonymous11/01/07
one little detail
This is the beginning of what portends to be a very nice story, but I do have one small quibble. (Apparently, you don't do many weddings.) The so-called "wedding march" is usually exit music, not the bride's entrance music (processional).
-- KK in Texas
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Anonymous07/31/10
Too bad you couldn't get past the age thing
A very nice love story. Except I don't understand why he would risk losing her simply due to an age gap. It's obvious they were sexually compatible. Oh well.
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Another fine little story ,you must have a very fertile mind .Well Done.
one little detail
This is the beginning of what portends to be a very nice story, but I do have one small quibble. (Apparently, you don't do many weddings.) The so-called "wedding march" is usually exit music, not the bride's entrance music (processional).
-- KK in Texas
Too bad you couldn't get past the age thing
A very nice love story. Except I don't understand why he would risk losing her simply due to an age gap. It's obvious they were sexually compatible. Oh well.
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