Oh please don't let this be the end of it! I really hope not. This is one of my favorite stories. I am glad to see that Master Michael saw that Master Samuel was getting a bit out of hand and took the responsibility of Cindy himself. Loved this chapter! Nicely done as always!
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Anonymous11/02/07
omg
This is the best story I've ever read please make a another chapter in this story it is so thrilling great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
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Anonymous11/03/07
Great chapter!!!
Another great chapter in another great story line!!
Keep us on the edge of our seats and coming back to read more MistressMerry!!
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Anonymous11/06/07
love it
I love all of your stories but I have to say that this story has to be one of your best next to Jake, Dad, and me (I hope I got the name right). I hope that you write another chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great story line and characters.
English
This is great!
I truly enjoy this series! Keep up the good work!!
Please?
Oh please don't let this be the end of it! I really hope not. This is one of my favorite stories. I am glad to see that Master Michael saw that Master Samuel was getting a bit out of hand and took the responsibility of Cindy himself. Loved this chapter! Nicely done as always!
omg
This is the best story I've ever read please make a another chapter in this story it is so thrilling great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Great chapter!!!
Another great chapter in another great story line!!
Keep us on the edge of our seats and coming back to read more MistressMerry!!
love it
I love all of your stories but I have to say that this story has to be one of your best next to Jake, Dad, and me (I hope I got the name right). I hope that you write another chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great story line and characters.
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