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BBW Anal Virginity Auction

bySamuelx©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/02/07

MAD

You mad cunt

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by Anonymous11/02/07

Interesting fac--Sammy shit for Brains has a long

list of contributions---Only 2 have high scores--Most repeat writers score H with 60% or more of their tales.

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by Anonymous11/03/07

Surely

Surely Literotica must know how offensive people find this long list of racist rantings ,why do they allow it?

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by Anonymous11/04/07

You are a little confused

If you describe your character as lean and athletic, you shouldn't put BBW in your title. Makes sense. Right?

You have a nice day.

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by Anonymous06/13/09

Someone needed a lot of filler

Good title, drew me right in, always a sucker for an anal virgin, and auctioning it off sounded intriguing. But the story drones on for paragraphs about the school and the fifty different sports they offer.
Sweetheart. This is a sex story. Skip the filler, get to the sex. I mean, there is set-up which is fine, but how does it help the story AT ALL to list tennis, squash, rowing, bla bla bla.
If you can't think up enough sex action to make your story up to 750 words, maybe story writing is not for you.

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by Anonymous12/28/13

Nice. more physicality.

Nice story with unusual protagonists. I liked that the black guy was interesting and made her feel good as a person, as well as satisfying her sexually. Could have described her more; size, shape of breasts and ass, and more on how they physically turned each other on.

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by Anonymous01/22/15

Isn't it fun when you ass hurts the day after? Great story!

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