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What Would It Be Like? Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by TheDandy11/07/07

Nice opening...

Looking forward to the next chapter! Lots to work with here.

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by Welby06/06/09

Nice start

Good story Giln, are you going to tell us more? I would love to find out what happens.

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