All Comments on 'The Retreat Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great!

This story was amazing! Cant wait fr the next chapter! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great update!

I'm still dying to know why Nick felt betrayed by her. Either someone made up a lie about her and told Nick, or else he thinks he saw her with another guy. He's crazy if he thinks one time with her will dissolve his desires.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
OMG !!!!

That was awsome . Nick is a dick : ) lolll

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Intense

So intense, emotional and beautiful! And what a hot stor too! I just love when anger turns into passion. Thanks for the update.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
This is a great story!

I am eagerly awaiting the next chapters!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Best work yet!

This is great. Far superior to anything else you've posted. Contemporary is definitely your forte.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
wtf

i love this story so far, but this man jut treated her like a cheap slut and she's pleased by the thought of being with him and having his child?!!! I'm confused.

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