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Pool of the Undine

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by Anonymous11/07/07

very interesting

very interesting story with a nice twist to it . . the only thing that made it less enjoyable was all the (I assume) British slang . . it made it very difficult to understand in parts

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You have a really creepy imagination. I like that! Twerp deserved just what he got.

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by juggaloplaya6911/26/07

Great

It was a well written story. As was you Venus--Redlights story.

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by Denkkar10/09/08

Love the sign

This guy had "I'm the doomed fall guy" written all over his forehead. It was clear that the end was near when he mocked the incredibly specific warning on the sign. Liked his reaction to walking on water.

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by Anonymous05/10/17

Fluids are Life

Wonderful description of a lout to a dried up lout...lol. Thank you for your writing. L

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