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Waiting on Paula

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/06/07

This is a woman who knows

what eating pussy is all about. At least she really writes about it well. That being said I can't wait for the cock sucking contest. Wonder how she is going to do it? Two girls on one guy or two girls and two guys then swap?
A good story that is well written.
Mike S.

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by rachelkafka11/07/07

THE BEST I EVER READ

THIS IS THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ. I WISHED I WAS ONE OF THE CHARACTERS IN THE STORY. I WAS ACHING MYSELF AND WISHING I WAS BEING TOUCHED.

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by liznc11/11/07

Very hot!

Wow, that was intense! I love that it was very focused on teh contest but did include m/f fucking! I enjoyed the variety...

Please write more with these characters.

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by walkingeagle11/11/07

Super hot! Great story!

This is a well written wonderfully told story! Super erotic and oh so exciting! Great job!

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by walkingeagle11/11/07

Super hot! Great story!

This is a well written wonderfully told story! Super erotic and oh so exciting! Great job!

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by Anonymous06/05/13

So sexy

Made me so very wet really wish I could have been in Paula's position!!

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