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by twelveoone11/04/07

ennui

and eunuchian/severe distast/for /one/word lines/and the best/come from songs/severern/a time machine/gone a-wry/

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by LeBroz11/04/07

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A strange vision this
the morlock giving thanks
as they gather round
the eloi's last supper

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