...a very good read from one of the best authors on this site. It has been a long time since a decent story has been posted here. Most of the authors have abandoned Lit.com and have been replaced by asseating queers that couldn't write a story worth reading by normal folks if their degenerate lives depended on it. It has become a rare occasion when someone other than queers and perverts submitted a story. Thank you for this one and please invite your author pals to return here and reverse the trend of the queers that have infested this place.
Very well written romance and erotic fantasy. Congratulations and thank you for the fine entertainment.PT
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Anonymous11/07/07
how sweet!
Thanks for the cavities, it was a very nice read! If you ever have a yearning to write something a little darker, how about considering a comeuppance piece about Jane's date rapist? thank you for sharing =)
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Anonymous11/08/07
RED SOX!
I LOVED THIS STORY IT WAS SOO GOOD! I ESPECIALLY LOVED THAT THEY WERE RED SOX FANS!!!!!
Jack, you sure write a touching and loving story. Love does bring out the best in good people and she deserved it. It is nice to read about things comming out good for someone who has had a rough time. Well Done and Thank You!
A beautifully written story Jack. Sounds like you may have found your own "diamond in the rough". I've only read a couple of your stories, but enjoyed what I read, this being the best. I have always liked the "wallflower" being triumphant over the assholes who have created her life. Maybe it has something to do with the "Southern Gentleman" that we both are. Baton Rouge here.haha I look forward to reading more of your creations. Thank you for a feel good read. Richard
A sweet and heartwarming story. Thanks for writing.
Can anyone please suggest any stories on a similar theme - a shy girl getting a guy?
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Anonymous11/08/09
What a beautiful story!!!!!
That story was one of the best I've read on this site so far. I was so impressed with the characters and how the story line progressed around them. I had tears in my eyes when I got to the love scene which was truly a love scene. It was touching and so well written. Please keep writing those lovely stories. Faith, Louisiana USA
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Anonymous01/09/14
abeautiful story of unfolding love for each other
I love this type of romantic story where it is soft and gentle without over-descriptive sex scenes....brilliant.....would have like to see how the relationship between them and her good friend developed and if they went to the wedding.....nice one
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Anonymous01/13/14
Total fucking rubbish by A Wanker
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Anonymous02/01/14
BEAUTIFUL
I really enjoyed this story. It shows what kindness and caring can accomplish. It was not about the sex. It was about the mental, emotional, and physical connections that allow us to make love. Thank you for creating this story.
PS: A Wanker's review, if that is what it is, is ridiculous BS.
I agree with all the others' that it is a great story . Only problem that I have with it is that the two scum that raped her got away with it . I say two rapists because the maggot assisting was just as guilty as the actual rapist . Too many times scum like this get away with it because of filthy lawyers. Unfortunately here in Australia we don't have a sex offenders list . The public in every state are screaming for it but for some reason our politicians who are mostly ex lawyers won't make it happen .
English
Beautiful story
Well done. Great humanity along with the erotica.
Beautiful Love Story
I'm a sucker for this type of romantic story. Greta work.
More touching than erotic ... which is just the kind of story I like ... two people with genuine concern and respect for the other ...
Leto423
Finally...
...a very good read from one of the best authors on this site. It has been a long time since a decent story has been posted here. Most of the authors have abandoned Lit.com and have been replaced by asseating queers that couldn't write a story worth reading by normal folks if their degenerate lives depended on it. It has become a rare occasion when someone other than queers and perverts submitted a story. Thank you for this one and please invite your author pals to return here and reverse the trend of the queers that have infested this place.
Romance and lust done with talent
Very well written romance and erotic fantasy. Congratulations and thank you for the fine entertainment.PT
how sweet!
Thanks for the cavities, it was a very nice read! If you ever have a yearning to write something a little darker, how about considering a comeuppance piece about Jane's date rapist? thank you for sharing =)
RED SOX!
I LOVED THIS STORY IT WAS SOO GOOD! I ESPECIALLY LOVED THAT THEY WERE RED SOX FANS!!!!!
Classic and unique
This is a classic scenario but I love your rendition of it.
Beautifully done!
Jack, you sure write a touching and loving story. Love does bring out the best in good people and she deserved it. It is nice to read about things comming out good for someone who has had a rough time. Well Done and Thank You!
A Top Vote
A beautifully written story Jack. Sounds like you may have found your own "diamond in the rough". I've only read a couple of your stories, but enjoyed what I read, this being the best. I have always liked the "wallflower" being triumphant over the assholes who have created her life. Maybe it has something to do with the "Southern Gentleman" that we both are. Baton Rouge here.haha I look forward to reading more of your creations. Thank you for a feel good read. Richard
So Enjoyable
This was a great story and I thank you for sharing it.
Wonderful
I loved your story. I really love stories with the theme of a shy girl getting the guy.
Great Story
Thank you very much for writing it!
Lovely story
A sweet and heartwarming story. Thanks for writing.
Can anyone please suggest any stories on a similar theme - a shy girl getting a guy?
What a beautiful story!!!!!
That story was one of the best I've read on this site so far. I was so impressed with the characters and how the story line progressed around them. I had tears in my eyes when I got to the love scene which was truly a love scene. It was touching and so well written. Please keep writing those lovely stories. Faith, Louisiana USA
abeautiful story of unfolding love for each other
I love this type of romantic story where it is soft and gentle without over-descriptive sex scenes....brilliant.....would have like to see how the relationship between them and her good friend developed and if they went to the wedding.....nice one
Total fucking rubbish by A Wanker
BEAUTIFUL
I really enjoyed this story. It shows what kindness and caring can accomplish. It was not about the sex. It was about the mental, emotional, and physical connections that allow us to make love. Thank you for creating this story.
PS: A Wanker's review, if that is what it is, is ridiculous BS.
A cute love story....
Well written with a good plot.
Great
I thoroughly enjoyed your story.
Boyd Percy
great story but !
I agree with all the others' that it is a great story . Only problem that I have with it is that the two scum that raped her got away with it . I say two rapists because the maggot assisting was just as guilty as the actual rapist . Too many times scum like this get away with it because of filthy lawyers. Unfortunately here in Australia we don't have a sex offenders list . The public in every state are screaming for it but for some reason our politicians who are mostly ex lawyers won't make it happen .
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