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Badly Written
The "writer" has no talent and shouldn't risk further embarrassment by submitting more "stories."
There's talent open your mind
How about, the first reviewer has no talent and should stop reading these stories if he doesn't like them and abusing authors who write for the benefit of others.
In Response to Anonymous
In response to the anonymous comment may we point out that our submissions on Literotica are an account of our experiences of several years swinging, we are not looking to win a Nobel prize for literature. If this appears a lack of talent then sorry! We write because we enjoy the swinging scene and hope sharing stories about our fun with the Literotica readers will give some people a little enjoyment.
Excellent story
I was imagining that it was my wife with Simon. Very descriptive. To be looking directly into her husband's eyes while Simon was banging away, was a heavenly sight. Wish my wife were a friend of Simons.
and gary too
lets not leave him from this, and all ok w it?
TAKING A HARD THICK ONE
WOW FANTASTIC STORY. TAKING MY YOUNG LOVER.
READING THIS WAS LIKE BEING IN THE ROOM WATCHING WITH YOUR HUSBAND SEEING YOU MAKING LOVE TO THIS YOUNG LOVER,
GREAT STORY EXCELLENT WRITING,
incredibly hot!
I would love to watch my wife being pleasured by a younger lover while a stroked my cock in ecstasy.
supportive husband?
its so fact sensitive
how come
how come she doesn't fuck him in the spare room and keep the bedroom with her husband off limits?
I am a wifewatcher
and it is great. I have written stories that appear on Literotica about Joyce, my wife, fucking other men. We do it for our pleasure and then write the stories together hoping someone will enjoy them. If they don't, nothing lost.
If someone writes a negative review? Don't care. Are some of the stories made up? So what. We are having fun and that's what is important to us. I love to watch my wife's face while she is getting fucked by another man. Usually, her eyes are closed, but when she opens them and sees me looking at her, she gets the biggest smile on her face. It makes me smile. It also makes my cock hard.
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