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Those Who Wear My Name

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by lorencino11/07/07

Why, you sweet old thing.

Well, its kinda charmingly disarming
to open my heart
to the melancholy message
of life as a melancholy man
surrounded by people he can love

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by LeBroz11/07/07

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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.


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by WickedEve11/08/07

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I read your poem because I like your work. I got to the fifth stanza and it all started to work out for me. :) Really like the second half of the poem.

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by twelveoone11/11/07

Holy Shit

I didn't even notice - thee mark of a good poet, no excellent poet, to say nothing and make it interesting, hey didn't Seinfeld make a carreer out of it, you didn't want a detailed critique did you?

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