by Marty82
how original! its so refreshing to hear a story of a different kind. nice job :) it really got e hot
Wow! I was blown away by your lovely work here. I can't wait to see what happens to Caroline, both with the plot and otherwise! ;-)
Thanks for the story, and please do more!
Please continue this story, as I see you already have, I wait in anticipation, for it is sensitive, compassionate, and definatily erotic!
now that was a great story - and there's 2 more!!! going to look forward to reading those in a bit!!! xx
Very erotic. I know english is not your first language but I could not tell from this.
Very stimulating love scenes that you build up to very nicely to get the reader wanting more as they read.
Moving onto the second.
Luv Kiwi