All Comments on 'Zone of Discretion Ch. 01'

Love it so far. Great pacing and characterization. Don't leave me hanging, write on!

I think this story has real potential. I will not say more as I do not wish to lead the author. I wonder where it is going? A good story and pretty well written. Keep it up.

Thanks,

Mike S.

I am enjoying where this is going... don't be too long in a follow up.

Great story! Please write more chapters to it! It's rare to see such human characterization and such a great build-up AND no huge spelling or grammatical errors... Please continue the story!

This is really great work! Wish you would continue this!

I think he carries himself with confidence and honor. I hope he will introduce Belle to his lifestyle with love and care.

More to this story ??? Looking forward to knowing how it unfolds

Great start. Really want to see where this goes!