All Comments on 'My Vampire'

Not bad at all! Raven needs to let me know what club she picked up her vampire at. I havent found mine yet . . .

I enjoyed this but the switching from Raven's first person to the vampire's 3d person observations was confusing and kind of took you out of the story. There should either be clearer divisions between the POVs, or just pick one to be consistent.

love love LOVE it!!!! PLEASE write more? =)

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I was confused on whose point of view this story was written from.