Half Asian College Co-Ed

Racist crap

Sorry, this is just racist crap.

The writer is a total asshole

and a fucking jackass

...

im not a big fan of the racism in the bedroom, but i wouldnt mind being jerked around and called a whore or bitch maybe... i am asian, just for a point...

asdf

I wont say the guy is racist, because, well, we all done strange things in the bedroom. I had a girll bite me so hard that she left a scar in the perfect formation of her bitemark on my shoulder. That was five years ago and its still here. I thought i was a pretty good piece of writing

I won't...

I also will not say the guy is a racist -- Considering he blatantly states that the comments/words/names he used were racist. In turn defeating such retorts. Also I don't use anonymous as a 'Who are you'. Think the Author should delete the purely destructive criticism. But that's just my belief.

Didn't entirely read the submission though. Mostly just a glance. Writing style isn't particularly eye-catching for me.

CALM down

It's just a story...
Get a grip, chill, it's not for real. If it is, it is!!
It was verry hot to this reader.

racist?

It is a non-fiction, fake, not real, prevarication people. If you get offended by the use of words that your mother called racist......DON'T READ IT! Better yet, form a committee to choose someone who will select a special prosecutor that will run the author through a fine mesh sieve and take the trapped particles to a fortune teller for review. The results can then be analyzed by another sub-committee who will then forward prosecution suggestions to congress. Then you can organize a campaign rally for Mrs. Bill Clinton to help ensure her election so that you and others like you will have the laws passed that will ensure that we all think just like you. Wouldn't that be great?

Great story

Accusations of racism seem a bit over-sensitive. I once had an asian girlfriend for a while and she actually used to encourage racial dirty talk - both ways. As much as she enjoyed hearing me talk dirty, I must admit it was hot to hear how she wanted the "white bastard cock". It's all part of the eroticism and getting hot by saying things that are taboo. Away from the sex, I am sure she didn't regard me as a "white bastard". ;-)

us half asian girl's love us some full breed cock!! :P

Good.

Would've been better if you kept repeating the exact words he used in his racist barrage.

her name?

i'd love to know :)

GODDAMN!

Loved this story! I wrote one about a girl I liked, but it's nowhere near as smooth reading as this, and I'm not sure I'll ever post it...