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by Anonymous

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by Angeline11/13/07

Great use of metaphor

and I love the personification in the last lines. I'm not sure what the second and third lines mean, but overall a really well-written poem.

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.

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by LeBroz11/14/07

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Such a pleasant call for the pleasures of the night — oh so comforting.

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by Tzara11/16/07

I am kind of dumbfounded by this

for good reasons, of course. It's really good. Makes me feel dullard, in fact, in trying to write my own poemisies.

I would ask you to marry me but I already am, and you more than likely are too. So I will only ask that you write more poems.

I know, I know. It's kind of a creepy rave. Sorry. I'm kind of a creep. :-)

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by GuiltyPleasure11/17/07

Wow!

Where did you come from? Wonderful stuff! (goes to read more.)

Tess

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