A Husband Loses the Bet

Have you ever heard of punctuation?

Hmmm!!

I say REVENGE on but of them, then DIVORCE her ass or at least threating to. Pay Backs Are A Bitch!!!!!! No Dick For The wife... You don't go changing the rules of a bet after payment has started. The WHOLE night was a setup for the start..

Have you ever heard of quote marks?

Fair premise, but the weak transition and lack of quotation marks were very distracting. Pronouns were swapped around and the reader cannot really determine which character is acitng/speaking.

Please get an editor!

Editor needed

I agree with the previous posts... hot story ruined by lack of grammatical awareness.

You read my mind

As the rest have brought up your grammar leaves much to be desired. The story was straight out of my dirty little mind, or so it would seem. Good stuff.

Love it!

This got me harder than anything in the last year. Would love to be in this situation.

Revenge

She'd be lucky if she wasn't physically hurt by the time he got the pictures back.

Won't be a next time Sis

Unless you come to the Divorce Court.

Fucking anons don't understand how to enjoy humiliation stories...

Anyway, I really enjoyed this! Humping a college girl's legs is the epitome of hot! Though you need to make use of conversational markers. Stuff like quotation marks. And question marks are for questions. "I heard a loud noise in the hallway?" For example, sounds weird. That's a spot for a full-stop.

And when he broke her little finger?

Did he get the pictures back before or after he broke more of her fingers? Did she have to testify in divorce court? What an idiotic, poorly thought out story.

Spanked the cum out.

My wife has spanked my cum out as well. markiee

ignore the idiots

nice story and would love it to happen to me!

When he sued for divorce

And they all ended up in Court and the pictures had to be produced, did they laugh when they all got jail time, he got a divorce and a ton of money? What? You thought he wouldn't react badly to being assaulted? Dumb.