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Snowball's Chance

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/15/07

Gripping story

A very good read that left me feeling pleased. It had to have a happy ending, as all good historical romances should. But getting there certainly had its ups and downs and twists. Lovely setting, and written with a great feel for the historical period. Very fine romance.
Congratulations.

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by 11/15/07

Very well done.

I'm a big one for happy endings and I loved the road you took to get it there. Sex in a coach under ermine furs really does sound fantastic. Nicely done.

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Sweet

I was a bit sceptical as i noticed this was your first venture into this category. However, im ashamed i doubted you considering how brilliant all your other stories are. I should have known better; this didn't disappoint. I loved it. It was erotic and sweet. You should do some more in this category because as always you're brilliant!

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by Boxlicker10111/16/07

I also like

happy endings, and this turned out happy for everybody, even her rotten strpfather, unfortunately. I did have some trouble following the foreign names and words, though.

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by hedi678911/16/07

nice!

i am german but not living in germany at the moment and reading your stories that take place in germany is always nice... with this story i also like that you chose old fashioned names fitting the historical setting. shows your knowledge.

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by Anonymous05/07/08

Romantic

I loved how you put all those German words in it without making it sound like you were showing off. Otherwise, only four stars because I would have wished for more details, more sex, less story. But well-written. You're good

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by freshface05/23/08

Nicely Written

The details and historical setting really enhance this story. You have a talent for creating elaborate settings with just a few words. I enjoyed the misdirections throughout and the happy ending.

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by freshface05/23/08

Nicely Written

The details and historical setting really enhance this story. You have a talent for creating elaborate settings with just a few words. I enjoyed the misdirections throughout and the happy ending.

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by Anonymous10/30/09

Clydesdales are not gray!

Clydesdales come in only one color, bay, not gray. Other than that, great story!

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by Anonymous06/30/11

kinda confusing but overall cute and good story

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