All Comments on 'The Retreat Ch. 07'

Great story! i hope we get to find out what really happen between jess and nick! Cant wait for the next chapter1

Justine & Jessica are twins? And it was Justine that Nick saw all those years ago? Anyway, whatever happens, it's a great story, so keep it up! =)

Nice to see Nick's dad and Jess's mom getting some loving in too - second time around is all the sweeter they say ;)

I keep checking back to read the next chapter...Please post more!

I Luuuuuuuuuve your stories!! Sooooo looking forward to the next installment!!!

I love this story and I can hardly stand to just sit and wait for the rest of it.. it seems like it has been too long since the last installment..please write more soon....

Please write more soon! I've followed this story and it just can't end like this, it's too good to not have a proper ending! Hope to see the next chapter soon =)

Please, please, please finish this story. The suspense is just killing. . . .

Good God! Are you trying to kill us! I'm not patient enough for this much waiting. Please finish this soon. I'm fairly dying here!

I can understand not having time to write through the Thanksgiving & Christmas holidays. Heck, I'll even give you the Super Bowl! But please give us another installment soon!!! I'm like a junky in need of a fix! I'm so invested in the characters you've created and your story line that waiting is plain torture.

You are a wonderful writer and a true story teller and the quality of your work is unsurpassed!

I love your stories and I check for an update for this one daily. at least let us know when you will be able to update it.

could you please post a conclusion to this story, its so good its a shame not to know how the story ends.

Please post the conclusion! I'm after reading the stories about a hundred times so I'd love to find out the endings!

its been SIX months already!! I'm on the verge of writing my own conclusion - Please if you still check this site out could you please post a conclusion, its such a shame to let a good story like this not have an ending.

This is insane!! And just plain mean!! We understand how life can get in the way, and a couple of months can go by, but it's almost JUNE, and the last installment was written about SIX months ago! Put us out of our misery and conclude the story!!

Please finish this story!

I wouldn't have started reading it if I knew it wasn't done. I figured by the dates and stuff the story was over..

I love all your stories.. but did you lose your password or something.

Are you waiting for a certain amount of pleading?

Do we have to say something in particular?

The sisters are twins which he will realize when they take her to the hospital. It is the only explanation. Even though I loved the story I would not have read it if I realized it was not concluded. After all this time I have to assume that we are not going to get an ending so I am making up my own!! I love haremgirl and hope she comes back.

Please please please, You have to finish this I thought it was done and now I am going to go crazy wondering what happens.

I like all your stories very much: Please don't let us wait for the conclusion of Nick's and Jess' story!

I'm looking forward to Nick begging for forgiveness and then the happy ending :)

gosh youve made us soo long for conclusion im going crazy but i do love your stories think their absolutely amazing. i want you to come back im sure youve had enough rest!

Yeah, thought the girls must be twin ;-)

I love this story i want to know how it ends pleas finish it im begging you (and i dont usually beg. ask my Bfriend). It would be a great christmas present or hanuka or what ever you belive in pleas!!!!!!1

your story is fantastic it's a shame you still didn't finish it. Please it's over a year since you last update. Please!

Please!!!! One last Chapter!!!!! Thank you!

I wish you had finished this one and continued to write for us. I hope nothing serious happened in your life. If you still check this, please finish what you started.

Does anybody know what the hell happened to haremgirl?

It's already 2009 turning 2010 in just a matter of days. What happened? Where are you? I hope you actually update if you are still alive.

Im thinking its R.I.P. Haremgirl your stories are amazing and you will be missed.. we all miss you :(

fantastic story, was the sister the one that Nick seen at the party? this was like a book i couldnt put down, thankyou

continue please!

Ok so i know that this is a long shot... But just think about it for one second... Cause i can only come up with two explanations for such a talented, skillful and regular writer to abandon her stories... Here me out and consider it:

1) She has gotten amneshia and she doesn't remember her password or the fact that she even has any stories....

2) She's dead.

Now personally i'm leaning towards point no. 2. If that's true than God bless her soul...

Where is the end of the story???????? This is BS! I invested hours into this damn story.

And no update at all!!!!!!! I love this story so please finish it

where is the rest of the story?Common u r a fantastic story writer...plz cntinuue

She has a twin right?? That is who he saw and not Jess. Just a guess since you haven't written in forever and prob won't, but that's my guess.

Finish this story!

What happens next?

Your writing and humour are missed.

sigh... why are half the hall of famers no longer writing on this site.. its rather depressing to be honest...the only logical answer of someone vanishing without a trace when they were loved so much, and appeared to be having so much fun... is death...

I've read all your story series...this being the last one...wasn't expecting you to leave it unfinished...thank you so much...now you are just like the rest...You SUck!!

Pls. Haremgirl. 'sif nt fnsh stry.

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I don't know if she's the same haremgirl though, but I wish her the best.

Your story captured me and drew me in. Now we need the final blow to their distrust. Until they get to the hospital we are left hanging. COME BACK HAREMGIRL!

Really enjoyed all your stories, well written and unbelievabl wankable. Please finish the last one if you can.

Great story but why didn't you finish it ????????

I never meant to leave you all hanging. I was debating various ways to continue the story when life became WAY too hectic for me. I had only recently graduated from university, I was busy trying to start my own business, and I also had a busy family life. My writing just sort of fell by the way side.

Fast forward 9 years...I have more free time now, and I'm writing again. I can't get back into my old account under Haremgirl, but I've started submitting a new novel, The Fall of the Wolf, under Haremgirlreturns. Please check it out and let me know what you think. Once I'm done with that, I'll try to finish the story for Jess and Nick. They really do deserve a happy ending. :-)

Very nice! I read The fall of the Wolf - GREAT story! Can't you finish this story under your new name? PLEASE????

Pretty sure you'll not finish this. Damn. I've enjoyed every one of your stories. You're a magnificent writer! Maybe someday you'll dust off the keyboard and return to grace us with more of your wonderful story telling.

"he waggled his eyebrows at her". I'm seventy nine, and have never come across this corniest of expressions. Please stop.

For those that didn't notice the original author posting below (7 years ago as of today), the conclusion is located here: https://www.literotica.com/s/the-retreat-the-conclusion

She lost access to this account, and has a new account, with a new story, and the final chapter of this one.

Enjoy!