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loved it
Please continue!
great start
well done, nice start, cant wait to see how anne changes, and evolves. I love it.
AWESOME!!!
Fab
Great start. This i can tell is gonna be a good story. Dont make us wait to soon!
definately continue
Great start im looking forward to seeing how it develops. Please give us chapter 2 soon
Definitely crap
This was the beginning of the beginning of a real story. I'm not sure why someone would post part of a part of a story. As is, it wasn't worth taking the time to read. Put some effort into this beginning and it might be worth the space it takes up on a hard drive.
continue
interesting...please go on
BRILLIANT
great story, can't wait for the next instalment. don't listen to the person who called it crap, they are just jealous and can't even put their name to their comment. PLEASE continue to write.
Very good
Going to he next tale now, ignore the asshole, they can write their own instead of bitching next time.
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