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The Goodbye

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/19/07

Got potential

You need to make your style less factual and more descriptive, more fluid.

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by 11/19/07

Pretty Good

I liked the style of writing and the sex was hot. I got a litle confused because you start off by creating Amy as someone to feel sorry for but then we find out she's a little mean and by the end we realize she's into using guys. Still a great story, but not sure I liked those types of characters.

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by Anonymous11/20/07

Hot?

Sorry, but you turned me off before the end of the second paragraph.

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