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Things We Said Today

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by Anonymous07/17/10

The roots of betrayal never stops to grow...

A damn good one HDK.

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by Scorpio4407/23/10

Smart Man!

Many men would have fallen into the trap. Yeah for the man who didn't. Well written. I enjoyed the angle the story came from, it enhanced the story.
Thank you.

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by Shuriwud08/05/10

ATTABOY.....

Fuck her!!!! I liked it.

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by FD4503/28/11

Much liked

The things I really liked were twofold

One: he didn't need to see his wife taking it up the ass in his own bed to realize that she had moved on. All it took was a lie, a look and another companion.

Second: his awareness. When I read the story about her lounging by the pool and being late from the sauna, I was thinking that the story was going to go in the direction of her continuing her flirting and fucking around.

Instead you nailed it. If I was thinking that, how could the ex husband not think that? And it wasn't the actions but the doubt that would weigh in his mind.

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by auhunter0406/09/11

some body once said

To thine own self be true,

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by DWornock06/15/11

He didn't get arrested for assualt so I gave it a 1.

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by rvws07/12/11

I liked this story

I love it when the other man gets his due and then has the fotitude to suck it up. I love it when a betrayed husband actually has a spine and doesn't fall for the cheating wife's tears of regret. This was a very good story. Good job harddaysknight.

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by Anonymous08/31/11

Another one from DWornock

"He didn't get arrested for assualt so I gave it a 1."

This is not the way to assess plot, character, or the quality of the writing.

This person is obviously mentally unbalanced or just loves to be spiteful toward the wonderful LW writers.

Why do the rest of us have to read this tripe? Can this person not be blocked from commenting? Other sites block inappropriate commentary.

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by mover09/06/11

Still a 5

Just re-read this great 'payback' story and it is still a top tale.

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by Anonymous09/23/11

I never knew...

...what an asshat was. Then DWornock arrived.

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by tazz31711/07/11

COMES BACK TO HAUNT US TOMORROW

and a long time into the future. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Treybo12/18/11

The snake gets the perfect punishment: access to the one she loves and yet totally denied what she truly yearns for, unconditional love from the only man she ever really loved.

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by Johnny1M03/15/12

I'm confused.

Not by HDK's story, but by DWornock's comment. Does he seriously believe that every fight results in an assault charge? And that's his basis for rating a very good story a 1? It just doesn't make sense. First, Mike followed his "best friend" into the restroom. He initiated the contact with no witnesses. So it would be a he said, he said. Second, Mike would have had to report the assault to the police. He might be feeling just a little guilty, don't you think? So it's certainly plausible that no assault charges would be filed, even if this were real life and not a story. Third, an assault would have no bearing on the story the author was telling. So why would he include it? He didn't tell about the mole on his mother-in-laws butt either, yet DWornock didn't complain about that. The only thing that I can think of is that DWornock is a troll and doesn't really believe what he writes. A troll is someone on the Internet who enjoys writing inflammatory things just to get people worked up. Why this is enjoyable to trolls, I have no idea. So either DWornock is a troll, or just not too bright. I'm giving him the benefit of the doubt.

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by betrayedbylove05/23/12

Excellent

She wanted it, she got it.
However, she would never have his trust again, ergo, no marriage.
Aw.
Fuck 'er

HA

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by Anonymous05/23/12

Benedict

he smoked the fat cock, his cornhole got a reaming, betrayed!

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by Tavadelphin09/06/12

Trust -

Not just it's value in general but it's importance in a relationship cannot be overstated - and this story is the embodiment of that concept.

He is getting some nice treatment from a woman he truly enjoys spending time with - winner. He gets to go places with a woman that is a pleasure to be around - winner, He gets to go home to a peaceful unstressed home with no fear of drama or betrayal - winner

She gets to spend time with the man she now knows she desperately needs - winner. She gets to see him spend time with him enjoy his loving attention - winner. She has to go home in the end alone and unsatisfied with her life - her own fault, her own actions her own failure and know she blew it - WINNER! Oh wait that one was for the rest of us lol

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by OLDED09/21/12

WITHOUT TRUST

You have NOTHING

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by tazz31709/21/12

#2 THE CHEATING WIFE WANTS A D0-OVER-AGAIN

any why would she even think it could happen. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by OldHideki10/21/12

I don't know if Janice really understood what she had done.

Until the flight back from the Keys. Now she knows the marriage is unrepairable. Thank You.

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by Anonymous02/09/13

I gave it 5 stars ...

... it was so similar to my story. In short; my wife cheated, we divorced then she tried to get back together. I agreed to a friend with benefits arrangement, but she didn't care for the "Bull Pen" and issued an all or nothing ultimatum. I have seen or talked to her in nine years.
Panther Fan.

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by semofuncpl302/15/13

Women are so fucking stupid.

They cheat and think nothing of it and expect you to just roll over when found out. But if they even think you might be cheating, there is no forgiveness.

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by Anonymous02/15/13

Right on the Money

That one hit home. In my experience with women; girlfriends, a wife and two daughters - they are much more flexible with reality than men are. Women seem to have the ability to deceive others as well as themselves with little or no emotional consequences. Men on the other hand clearly identify friend or foe and keep track of threats. It is in a man's nature to protect his home, and his family. When the enemy turns out to be from within it is a hard hit to absorb. Trust is key to mutual survival. If you can't trust your partner to remain faithful how can you trust her with the family finances? What happens if you get sick? Will she be there for you? She can't keep another guys cock out of her pussy, how can you trust her with the big survival issues? Especially after many years of marriage and children, to find out that someone has cheated on you undermines the foundation of the marriage. How can you really know what else has happened? How many secrets has she betrayed? How much money has been embezzled? Once the trust is gone - the relationship is dead.

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by firas0103/21/13

it is a pity

that many RAAC writers on this site and unfortunately many men out there can not see it as simple as this, she cheats and the trust as gone, and without the trust there is no marriage

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by firas0103/21/13

BTW

five stars

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by JackorChuck04/28/13

Man Up

So many men in your stories get physically sick and end up vomiting when confronted with their wifes infidelity. My own experience is diferent, when I caught my wife in bed with her lover I wanted to punch her and her lover, however not wanting to go to jail I refrained. I did however grab her lover by the hair and physically remove him from the house.
Just like this story my wife has tried to get us to reconcile, fat chance.
Hardaysknight you write entertaining stories but please no more vomiting heroes.

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by Duna04/28/13

Free of charge escort girl

He uses her like a free of charge escort girl. Qhml1 wrote a similar end story.

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by OneShotOne05/09/13

Now that's

a 5 star story.

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by monkcalm07/30/13

Only one major issue

He should have taken pleasure from her pain, a mate cheats lies and cuts you to the quick, her/his cries and begging are the sound of child's laughter pure joy, so why do so many fear confrontation... look at how we are raising men(by women),dont get upset ,dont respond,dont confront, be passive, dont judge, just go along. The reason men are so weak in some stories(be side the writting) is because it is what we have be turned into by women/media and there slaves..honor ,duty,respect do not belong in the military alone..women passed the no bullying law and look you cant even fight back any more but yet in the TV and in life the girls all fuck the bad boy but want the nice one to pay for the life they led. Ive got a lot of married nice buddies trapped in the feminist cunt trap and they are raising the boys the same way..we now have a generation of sheep and when they snap we get school shooting...you cant punish your kid, you cant fight back, divorce always hurts the victims(no fault shit)... and then you have your mate..kids yours?...its just sex?...because you tell the bad person in the marriage to fuck off and hold them accountable your an asshole? People enjoy destroying he bad guy/woman if we dont accept the fact we hate scum and fight them and enjoy the freedom and their defeat .. we are going to LOSE IT!

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by Anonymous11/07/13

Five stars

Just frickin' perfect. No one, neither man nor woman, can ever be trusted again once they are cheaters. I have a dog in this fight, so I know.

My wife was cheated on by her first boyfriend, a young man I knew well. Everyone knew he was cheating with everything he could stick his dick in, except his girlfriend, my wife to be, someday. When she found out she was devastated, as could be expected, she was sure he was the one to grow old with and have his children. After a few weeks apart, he found he was needing pussy so took my wife to be back for a few weeks while he pounded her night and day. Sure enough, he cheated again and a few months later, she and I got together. Its been 36 years, almost 37 and I heard her tell a classmate of hers once, she hasn't thought about him again, except as a cheater.

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by lance_spearman01/19/14

Good story

But I was hoping for more. Simply because Things We Said Today is my favourite Beatles song (~grin).

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by tazz31702/08/14

YOU DONT HAVE TO TAKE PLEASURE IN WINNING

but humiliation of the other parts will always feel good, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Pultoy02/12/14

Thanks for writing

This is another thoughtful, well written read. 5*
Regards,
-Pultoy

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by sugna05/22/14

Dead on!

You are dead on with your size up of broken relationships! Having a person that you can trust as your partner trumps everything else!

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by Anonymous07/03/14

trust cheaters

The thing about a cheater is that you can fool yourself enough too decide to trust them
It's just that the reality is you can't trust them.

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by Tootight107/23/14

good story

there wasn't much of a prelude to this story. if her only betrayal, was having a dinner with his best friend, and it was the first time. over reaction is the word that comes to mind, about his original divorce, and should reconsider his stand.

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by Jack9908/10/14

@Tootight1 - Maybe you only read the last half of the story or something. The wife was cheating with him for about a year:

"That's great advice from a slut wife that carried on with her husband's best friend ....for about a year, wasn't it? Who the hell were you thinking about, Janice, when you slept with Mike"

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by impo_5808/10/14

Trust...

When trust and respect are lost, no marriage can survive...

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by Anonymous09/29/14

Trust

Alas, he figured it out that trust is the foundation of a relationship between a man and a women.
George in Omaha

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by Anonymous10/13/14

Really good

Short, but "nuff said", and made the point. You don't know what you've got until you lose it.

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by Anonymous10/22/14

good

Kendra had been furious at her mother, but never really turned her away. Her love for her mother was possibly more pure than my husbandly love, but then Kendra's love didn't require fidelity. - this is one of the most creative lines i read on this site for sometime now.

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by KarenE01/14/15

No Way Jose!

She doesn’t have to be his “enemy”, but he doesn’t have to take her back, either!

“No strings”? HA!

Everything’s fun, now that he’s a free agent, but if they re-marry who’s to say she won’t cheat again?

Good for him, somehow I think when she loses hope completely she'll drop the FWB.

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by KarenE01/14/15

Further Thought

MAYBE there might have been some hope if the fling with Mike had been some sort of a drunken hook up with a stranger, but to LIE to him to set up a PLANNED tryst with his best friend?

That's just unforgivable.

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by Anonymous01/23/15

Point well taken

This story is a classic example of why when one of a couple cheats, they should split, immediately and have little to do with one another again. The one who was cheated upon, no matter how much love is still involved, will have trust issues with them, no matter how long they stay together.

No, best to rip the bandage off and have a clean wound to heal properly. The one who was cheated up will still have trust issues going forth, but at least they won't have to be putting up with a proven cheater.

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by betrayedbylove01/23/15

Well

What did she expect? Once you cheat trust is gone.
Damn

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by sugna01/28/15

Read it Again

He should have thanked her for the closure that she had provided him. He couldn't trust her, so there was no partnership in their future. More so, the divorce was done, there child was grown and she had proven she did not care about his well being. Was the fact that she was lonely and depressed that she had turned into an adulterous whore the reason why she wanted to get back with her husband and somehow "erase" her sleazy past? Certainly she had not cared about her husband or her daughter before. Oddly, the statement about her daughter still loving her had me baffled. Have you ever met a child whose parent cheated on his/her family? Children are most often the harshest critics of their parents. Adultery often warrants a death sentence in a child's mind. I have seen this logic used before on this site and it has been the opposite to my experience in life. You see, the children are cheated as well as the spouse! Get it? They are also cursed by being a blood relative to a cheater. That is reality.

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by tazz31701/28/15

HE SAID A MOUTHFUL ABOUT THE TRUST ISSUE

and why she thought it would be any different. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Drbeamer333302/22/15

Enjoyed it

another great flash tale. Five stars.

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by Drbeamer333302/22/15

One more thought...

I didn't get the tie in to the title. They said many things over many days.

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by tO1kmhq5apoPRPwx03/11/15

5/5

Good one.

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by xtchr03/14/15

Finally!

Finally, a man who understands what trust is. Once it's lost it is very, very difficult to get it back. A short story but it said everything that needed to be said. A guy that loved this woman but had to let her go for his own sanity...and he did. Thanks for a good story.

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