All Comments on 'Playtime'

by KarennaC

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brfinestbrfinestover 16 years ago
Nicely Written

All of your stories are nicely written. But way too short. Three or four pages at least, long enough that I can cum with you and your characters. Some of us older guys need time to stroke off. Get hard quickly enough but takes some time to feel our balls begin to draw up, picture your hot, sexy body in front of us and stroke our cocks til we shoot our hot cum over your body, in your mouth or in your tight pussy. Detailed description of your characters would be nice, hairy pussy or bald cunt, lush tits or pretty mounds with ereaser nipples. A clit peeking out from its hood or too shy to appear except inside a loving, sucking mouth? Thanks for a nice beginning and a hard on. Richard

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Nicely Written

Enjoyed it very much. . .in reality and in rememberance. LOL

But I do have to say you did leave a bit out. LOL

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 16 years ago
Very Hot

A very hot story. Loved it.

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