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Engaging story, DG!
It was a fun, rewarding read. A bit predictable, but it was all good predictions.
Nice effort!
Regards, Jack
AGAIN
Again you have done it. I look forward to every installment of your stories and when they end I find that I am sad because it like saying goodbye to people that I know.
I Love Happy Endings
Just a note to say "Thank You" for a very nice story.
You've gone and done it again!!!!!!!!!
I love your stories and this one is no exception. Thanks for sharing your talent with us all.
Bravo!
Just like finishing a fine meal, this was a very good ending. I like your style of writing. Keep them coming and I'll keep reading them. Thank you for a wonderful story. Luis
Chick Flick
What a great chick flick. Not a chick, and loved it!
well done!
Thank you so much,DG.This is the type of story we all need once in awhile.It really lifts the spirits.
awsome story
I loved the whole story. Thanks
Great...
....as always.....keep it up!!!
A fantastic passionate & romantic story
A really great Romance, as one comment stated a real chick-flick and tear jerker. You do an exceptional job. There are no real surprises just a lot of passion in these characters. Your writing puts me in with the actions of the characters. That’s what a good Author will do is put you in the picture he is painting.Thank you again for the wonderful entertainment.PT
You did it again
DG, You have a God given talent. Too often, anymore, writers try to make things too complicated. Your stories are uplifting. Thanks
Really one of your best!!!
Thank you so much DG for yet another exceptionally well-written story - really one of your best. I was hooked all the way through! A super tale with the kind of happy ending I look forward to and love. I always look forward to great stories from DG Hear and I can't wait to read the next. Yes full marks - any suggestions for improvement would be superfluous - to me it couldn't be better! A devoted fan, Pete.
great!
Just want to say thanks for another well-written and vivid story!
wonderful!
I loved the character development. Nice job!
The Best Story Written
DG I really think that this story was the Best ever written.
Atlanta,Ga
Just Wonderful
AS always. I really enjoy your stories, they are always great. I look forward to more.
wonderful
A truly wonderful story, much enjoyed, keep it up.
Once again, a masterful performance, thank you D G
D G, your writing is so effective and fun to read. I don't think I have ever NOT completed one of your works, reading nonstop to the end. Never had the motivation to do that for any author until now. Keep it up, tou are truly a master wordsmith.
The best
You might be the best Romance writer on Literotica. This story, and your other one, A Second Chance, are two of the best I've read. You have a talent, a very good one.
U make me dare to dream again
It was really good, i.ve read lots of stories on this site, but yours is the first one which made me express my feelings real loud. It's beautifully written. It really gives me hope to dream. You're right, true love needs no chains, if you love someone, just let them be free, they'll definitely come back if you two are destined to be together.
Great story ...
I had to comment on this story as it brought tears to my eyes when she realized Jim was laid up in the hospital she worked at. What a great read .. I highly recommend it.
You are Greatly Appreciated
I read, and re-read your stories and always come back for more.
Thank you and those that support you for your effort and creativity!
Theodora, Justinianus and Belizar were friends and Theodora was a prostitute. If the plague and climate catastropha did not arrive they three would refound the Roman Empire in the VI Century. The Justinianus the Emperor never had talked his wife past. Theodora was a great Empess beside his husband.
It is an eternal true that it is the important where you go to and not where you come from.
If you read this story, I suggest to read from misterstan "Seven Facts About Your Wife" on the LW section and after it you should reread this story again. Second meaning of DGHear's story will understand well.
A bit slow
I took long enough for Jim to finally get with Angel.
A Hungarian way of saying
Against the American way of saying "A cheater is always cheater", we (Hungarians) have a way of saying (very interesting) From the BEST WHORE will be the BEST WIFE. This Hungarian way of saying does not say every whore, but the BEST. What a different. DG Hear has 2 excellent escort girl stories, this is one of them. The second is "Built on Lies". Both stories are an excellent example of this Hungarian way of saying..............
its ok to be sorry
and apologize, but you don't have to be wimpy about it. you fell in love with her..well ok...but blaming yourself for saying what was in your mind, it is kind of too much, she was a whore when you met her, so the outburst is directed at her because you dont know her enough to trust her and all you know is that she is a whore, and it was directed at yourself for falling for such a woman, however, you fell for her,,,ok,,,good for you,,,but calling yourself an ass and all the other things because you told a whore that she is a whore is way too much.
Wonderful Story
I hope that the Hungarians and not the Rednecks have it right! In that case there is a reason to struggle to improve. I know that there are good historical reasons (Calvinism) but the determinism in much modern USA still leaves me sad since it says there no use trying to improve. Sue, in the story, pointed out that one key could be doing the job for the sake of survival and not together with alcohol and drugs.
The story was a truly fine read. I was the first to comment on the first chapter many years ago and do not remember why I did not comment on the other two chapters, a situation which had to be rectified..
So the doctors "induced a comma!" I hear they often do that, especially when there's a problem with the colon.
Another Great
One Another Great Story From Great Writer
THIS...
...is probably your finest story - Thank YOU !!
Eceptional srory
All the advice is solid and the people were winners -
You done fine!!
Exceptional !
I wondered where you would go with this story, and you surpassed anything I could have imagined. A "5". Thank you.
Song lyrics
when I read this I thought of the song "I found my sweetheart Sally"
God brought her back to me. What she has been, what she has done, I never care to know—because to me, she'll always be as pure as driven snow.
Great story. Great sentiment and lesson.
No, I don't wish my wife had been an escort once, but I'm glad it worked in your story, and I hope it has worked in real life for real people. I don't think I could have been as open minded and generous as Jim. But then I found my Angel without having to go through his drama and trauma. I enjoyed reading about their journey to find love and happiness. Thank You for brightening our lives.
Best
I've read a lot of your stories with mixed opinions but this one was definitely the best. I do have a few reservations of a girl working for an escort service even to finance collage but it was a necessary part of this story.
very nice 5* story
BUT 2 points 1: There is no such thing as a nurse with a physical therapy specialty. they are two TOTALLY different fields in medicalPERIOD 2: there is NO NECESSITY in the usa to become a SLUT so you can go to school or eat. escorts are the scum of the earth, at least other whores are just trying to buy drugs/survive. I would much rather NEVER graduate or take 10 years than be a skank slut and lose my self worth.
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