All Comments on 'Julie's Mistake Ch. 23'

by GrantLee

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Awesome!

I love this series, you should definitely continue it. I especially can't wait to see what Julie's plan is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
While it is intresting...........

<p>...It seems at some point you need to let the husband in on this and let him run far, far away, as she gets to the point of no return. As it stands, it looks like Julies husband is nothing but a bookend to the story that is needed to be trotted out every once in a while so the readers don't forget she's married. He needs to catch her and divorce her at some point.</p>

<p>Very, very, Soon</p>

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Awesome so far ...

would've loved if there was a scene where Pamela was lead into the bedroom and forced to eat out a bound and hooded Laura while Hull watched.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
WOW!!!

Please keep this story going, and if you could speed up the release of the next chapter. I think Julie ( the namesake of the story) needs to come back in and be futher lead down to the dark side by servicing Laura or Pam, or Julie could be taken out in the town as an anything goes girl

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great Story! More Julie....

I'd love to see you take Julie into a darker place. Convert her completely into a submissive whore. This reminds me of the classic story "The Mortgage" by Marlissa.

If you can take Julie to a similar place it would be incredible.

Keep up the good work- Also- would love to see updates sooner. I know we all have lives, but just a gentle suggestion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
more Julie?

I'm glad you go on posting. Julie is still the most exciting character of the story, so like others, I hope to read more about her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wish Julie could meet Trouble In Paradise's Jill!

THAT would rock!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
More Julie please

Julie needs to come back!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
WOW

What a great story! Keep it going. It would be great to get Laura and her mom with Julie in Interracial gangbang(Public???)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Oh my! Pamela & Laura fun continues

A great series - keep up the super story ...

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