Leader of the Pack Ch. 05

DANG!

Its getting better and better, I just wish there was MORE! I love this but its always sucks when it ends without knowing what comes next!

DANG!

Its getting better and better, I just wish there was MORE! I love this but its always sucks when it ends without knowing what comes next!

Your Killing Us!!! Please keep them coming.

sHE JUST DISAPPEARED AND NO ONE WONDERED HOW?

eeep. Ok, I'm loving this story line and the characters. Buuutttt, I need a better explaination for the fact no one wondered how/why/where she disappeared to...one minute she was there and the next...poof?

Tease

What a tease. I loved the end.

Why?

She dissapeared right in front of their eyes and nobody is wondering how could this happen? For that matter, how can a Lycan dissapear, that's not part of their powers...there has to be a reason, and the pack knows it. I love this story, but this part didn't make sense, some research or world building would have been appreciated, adding to the plot.

Can't wait for more

Is it tomorrow yet? I love this story. I wish that there was more. I am an addict now. Thanks, it gets me out of bed in the morning

addict

Oooo i cant wait for the next one in this story! *sits and waits*

Replying to comments?

You guys are serious? This is not your story! You cannot say what is and what is not! At that, it wasn't her that made herself dissapear! It was that Rave or Rayoul or whatever the hell his name was.

Byah!? I. Love. This. Story.

Obvious How she disappeared

Jenna went poof because of Rafe. Follow the story-line people! I adore this story very much. :-D

Obvious to the *reader* but not to the Weres

To the post just before this one: Of course it was Rafe, because we're the readers. But why didn't the Weres react? They didn't know about Rafe.

Still loved it, though. Heh.

Dry opinion

Too short.

damn fine read

Such a clever hiding place for an assassin to hide the weapon of choice.....there goes that snide bitchery thing again...

Lol Alpha

If it was me as Aisslyn I would have gone to Jenna's head and let her show her true self.. but still a great story

I'm not getting the timing of this – Cullen rushes off to save his pack, then suddenly he's getting a blowjob while he waits for the attack? Holding a poisoned stiletto inside her is a ridiculously elaborate way to try to kill him – you're trying too hard.

Response to anon

He rushed off because he didn't know when the attack would happen, and then had to wait with arousing suspicion.

great story...but

only 1 page a chapter is really much too short.....and inconvenient...but nonetheless a well thought out story...

Good Story

Thanks for posting

Question

Why would the Alpha of the other pack promise retribution when his daughter just suddenly vanished? Shouldn't they think something was up when everyone was watching them????

Doesn't make much sense