Why would any real woman Kow-Tow to a stupid male is beyond me
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Anonymous11/19/07
ignore that
This was well written and imaginative. Ignore the prejudiced comment. I do not understand why people make comments like that rather than about the quality of the story. Haven't they ever heard; if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all?
...is why someone would bother reading in a category they don't approve of only to make a comment on it? Perhaps guilt over something they want so badly but can never have? :)
I liked it. Loved it. It was well written and sensual. It's obvious that the girl is very devoted to her Master and takes into account his pleasures while at the same time, showing that they are her pleasures as well. Nicely done!
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Anonymous11/20/07
Beautiful
See even we girls, get to leave our wish lists. Loved it :)
to the fool who couldnt read the bdsm you need to get a clue... fake or real it was well written just as any sub would write it.. sometimes people take some of these stores to serious you dont know if there fact or fiction thats why its called a story.ignore the fool well done
I've been reading a lot of the stories, and really enjoyed this one. It is not my way of life, but it was enjoyable to have insight into another! Good work!
It was interesting and I thought it was very well written. The one thing I would like to see is a continuation on whether a girl got everything she wished for.
in fact, a very good story for a first submission. BDSM is not my thing or life, but it was a fun read of an area I have little knowledge about. You do need to work on grammar, regardless of the genre in which you write. Good luck in the contest. Ignore the Troll comment. We all get them sooner or later, don't let them (Trolls) discourage you from writing more. caprine
you've done very well pet, and I am quite pleased. This was very well done for your first submission, and I expect future submissions will only get better. The few mistakes will be fixed with practice, and to those who could find the time only to comment on such things, I say.... go back to your library reading circle until you learn the joy of a -story-.
Good girl!
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Anonymous12/03/07
Short and Sweet
Just the right amount of eroticism, mixed with humor. Really enjoyed it!
English
What a pityful stupid broad--Must be blonde.
Why would any real woman Kow-Tow to a stupid male is beyond me
ignore that
This was well written and imaginative. Ignore the prejudiced comment. I do not understand why people make comments like that rather than about the quality of the story. Haven't they ever heard; if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all?
What I don't understand...
...is why someone would bother reading in a category they don't approve of only to make a comment on it? Perhaps guilt over something they want so badly but can never have? :)
I liked it. Loved it. It was well written and sensual. It's obvious that the girl is very devoted to her Master and takes into account his pleasures while at the same time, showing that they are her pleasures as well. Nicely done!
Beautiful
See even we girls, get to leave our wish lists. Loved it :)
well done
to the fool who couldnt read the bdsm you need to get a clue... fake or real it was well written just as any sub would write it.. sometimes people take some of these stores to serious you dont know if there fact or fiction thats why its called a story.ignore the fool well done
it was cute
I thought this was a neat little piece. To the one that didnt have the guts to add their name. You don't get much, do you?
This is not an English Class
However if it were it would rate about C-.
Very nice
I've been reading a lot of the stories, and really enjoyed this one. It is not my way of life, but it was enjoyable to have insight into another! Good work!
Interesting
It was interesting and I thought it was very well written. The one thing I would like to see is a continuation on whether a girl got everything she wished for.
A good...
in fact, a very good story for a first submission. BDSM is not my thing or life, but it was a fun read of an area I have little knowledge about. You do need to work on grammar, regardless of the genre in which you write. Good luck in the contest. Ignore the Troll comment. We all get them sooner or later, don't let them (Trolls) discourage you from writing more. caprine
From a girl's Master
you've done very well pet, and I am quite pleased. This was very well done for your first submission, and I expect future submissions will only get better. The few mistakes will be fixed with practice, and to those who could find the time only to comment on such things, I say.... go back to your library reading circle until you learn the joy of a -story-.
Good girl!
Short and Sweet
Just the right amount of eroticism, mixed with humor. Really enjoyed it!
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