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Cant wait!
I loved this first chapter, a great beginning, I want to know who Kadence is also! I also, want to know if you will be finishing Raineys song?
Great start...
cannot wait for the next chapter.
Very good!
Very interesting and so well written. I can't wait to read more! Great job!
Great start
and think that this has the potential to be a blockbuster. Was intrigued enough to go back and read some of your other stuff. Would love to see an outcome to Aidan and Rainey's story as I think you are doing yourself a disservice by not finishing it. Only my humble opinion.
COME ON FINISH RAINEY'S SONG!!!!!
Loved this beginning! BUT COULD YOU REALLY PLEASE FINISH RAINEY'S SONG!!!!! I BELIEVE YOU STILL HAVE GOT THE SPIRIT IN YOU!!!!
PLEASE DO COMPLETE RAINEY'S SONG!!!
great begginning
But i am with the others atleast tell us if u r going to finish with rainys song or not... apart from that great story please let the chapters commin
More
I need more of this story, please.
Come back to this one too!!!
I love your stuff!!! Come back to this one too...Can't wait for more of everything!1
Good start
Any plans to continue this series?
WHERE ARE YOU? ITS 2010!!!
please finish your remaining stories especially SWEET TALK
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Damn it, I did it again!
I got "sucked in" to reading a GOOD story with well developed characters and a very interesting plot when "BAM!" the story just ended.
PLEASE, please use your remarkable talents to complete a story before publishing. The very least you could do would be to warn unsuspecting readers that the story hasn't been completed. I could go to the last page of a story to try to determine if the story has an end, but that would be like reading the end of a mystery and learning "who dunnit" and spoiling the story.
Sincerely,
deJay
Cliff hanger...
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