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I enjoyed this!
It has a simple rhyme scheme and isn't trying to portray itself as "great" poetry, but it's funny and clever. Sometimes that's just right. :)
Your poem is recommended in the New Poems review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read! :-)
Angeline
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What a smashing way to start the day. A smile but then there's something buried in there makes me wonder if it's not hurting anyone .. why not?!! Well done and thankyou
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who in the hell recommended this? who in the hell zapped it?
Well Done. More fun, less angst. Like oily water into deep/
And turbid pools/ BTW excellent trans stanza enjambment. Indolence ROCKS!
catching pick up lines, then some sleep
I remember Pascall dubious theological bet, I remember thinking: Huh? I can believe more in a guy making me soon a millionaire if I just send him some money ... Some believer... But I am not not as romantic as to drool over the natural happy simple life of s fly or a rose either ... So I guess we connect over booze, insomnia and the fantasy of at least catching some good pickup lines!
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