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W.T.F.
The need for wife to be a slut to get off is a little sick to me. I guess for sake of story you need to have some stud fuck the shit out of her, than you have great sex after. Not very erotic but your story.
Very Good
Sounds like it could have happened, or be happening now, step by step. Will she fuck Evan in front of you or come home and give you all the details after? I'm surprised he didn't send or offer pics of his cock as he jacked off to your wifes pics and voice. Don't get bogged down in making his cock something too big, normal is good.haha
I agree
I agree with brfinest. Good story, well told. Ignore the first comment, though. Why read a story if you are going to condemn it?
You have a woman who is on the way up in a
large company this is very visible to everyone. Now you indicate she will send nude and sexual posed pictures to a person in the company with whom she has to deal. Further you indicated the husband had to leave the company to further the wife's career as per company policy. Then you suggest she would be so stupid as to even consider the pictures or a sexual romp with the guy. One word, one picture, and her whole career in such a company would be ruined. Your whole description of her showed she had brains, more than her husband who was obviously in a lower echelon. Now you portray her as a mindless slut who thinks only with her cunt to the point of ruining her career. Sorry very few women who didnt get to upper echelon levels with the slit between their legs, open the slit once they are on the road up. And if they do it is never with an equal or lower echelon person, nothing to be gained there. Grow up and mature a bit, some experience in the real world would help.
Ignore the ass holes
I am always amased by the righteous dribble some idiots respond with. Literotica provides a very clear indication of what you are going to read. If you are offended, stay off the site, or select only catagories that do not offend.
It was a good very creditable story.
Who are you people?
Do you really log on to a site like this and not realise that these are stories, not factual accounts of other peoples sex lives. Some may be true, but most are erotica, designed to arouse, not for serious contemplation.
As an author, I think that I speak for most of us when I say that we are sick and tired of the constant moral lectures on our work. There are a lot of categories that do nothing for me so I don't read them, I am not into anal or incest, which seems to be the most popular here. I do not feel that I need to rant at the creators of this work to teach them the error of their ways, I just don't read them. Easy really.
If you do have so much to say, write a story that appeals to you and lets see how you get on!
This is a good story for those that like this category, I look forward to more!
I will remain anonymous to avoid the inevitable flood of low votes from the idiots which normally result from this type of comment.
Keep going!
Slowly breaking her down so that she turns into the Loving Wife he wants...great job! keep the E-Affair going right up to the end! Would make a great Blackberry ad campain
It's not cheating if hubby is involved
and willing
What a really dumb story!!
Nothing else to say!
You have the making of a good series here.
I particularly like how she gets turned on by it. Please write many more chapters!!!!
strange
a man and a woman in the same company. the man has to leave so she can climb up the ladder. he looses self confidence in not finding some good job anymore. and now the woman with no "real" strong male gets hit by other company guys and she gets horny and her now "week" guy likes it ???????? what a fantasy. I just guess this is a womans fantasy.
Men generally like a woman because she is witty , beautiful, charming, sexy... what ever , but its all about her. Women in genral look more if he is acceptet by the community,is strong, has power, money or what ever. there is more about the surroundings than about him. So starting a company affair will make her maybe lose that to. So this story is very strange.
as the short, deep thinker said, dear author
it ain't cheatin' nor a cheatin' "story" if hubby is giggly over wife fucking some dude with 30 inch dick so he could have a delicious creampie. remember, you ain't writin' for 6 year olds, though many still prefer 6 year old stories, even if laced with grown up stuff here!
this type of "story" is about men who are excited and would would dash left and right to "help" their women (as if these women are that clueless and don't know how to pick up Jamal and friends from the street corner) suck and swallow disease infected bodily fluids, so they could participate in such acts after their women's sessions, because the husbands are too wimpy and are too ashame of their wimpiness, and are not able or willing to go straight to the source (other men)
The true title of the story should read
Confessions of a Wimp:. I mean look at it. The wife and the husband used to work for the same company but he had to quit so she could climb the ladder. He states that he liked the job and hasn't been able to find anything as good since. Oh give me a fukin break man...er I mean wimp...You are the classic wimp. The (hahaha)wife is the classic bitch whore. Oh this story has gotten off to a bad start and will only get worse if the so called writer continues. My vote says ...Trash the story and the writer. We have enough wimp writers on the site that already that do not know how to be a man...THANK GOD FOR WINTERFROG.WHERE ARE YOU WHEN WE NEED YOU.WINTERFROG WRITE A STORY AND GIVE YOUR OPNION OF THE WIMPS ON LIT. SAVE UP FROM THEM.
good lead up
Very hot story. I'm anxious to read how far she will go...
Pure crap
Why is it that so many writers enjoy writing stories about mindless wimpy husbands wih no moral values? You indicated she was very smart at her job, however, her actions in dealing with her emotions wasn't very smartat all.
So much for her career
Let's see. She is sending compromising photos of herselt to a married guy that reports to her or is at least lower on the corporate totem that she is. You can bet he will demand more or threaten to go to her boss saying she is sexually harrassing him. Or maybe he just wants her job. Hubby may no longer have the ability to tell her she can't do it.
Cuck
A cuck by any other name is still a cuck. You're not helping your wife cheat, your pimping her so you can be cucked. I know it's a fantasy, but if you'll follow up on this in real time, from what I read here, I think you'll truly enjoy her being serviced. My I suggest you select a gentleman of the darker persuasion, maybe someone with a rather large and thick penis. If you will to this, I believe her screams will be especially pleasing for you. In any event, over the next several years I believe there will be any number of youngsters more than ready to rut with your lovely wife.
Nice story
Nice story. Ignore the cuck comments. You could develope this so that he starts to dominate his wife by exploiting her sexuality. She obviously wants to go a bit futher with the guy and you can encourage provided she agrees to some demand you make. You've opened up a load of opportunities to exploit, go use them and ignore the prats.
Good luck and good writing
Self Cucking is Sickly Humiliating the writer
Surely this couldn't be your first effort writer. You must know that only the very few jaded sickos like you will applaud your addiction to the worst kind of self disrespect.
The fact that you would devote such effort and time to this male self disgust and humiliation should embarrass you - just like you wanted.
Then there is the absurdity of your tales path and setting - as even a jerk off effort its pitifully lacking.
Sadly - you need help for even as a fantasy this reveals your interest and weakness's - need for male humiliation, watching cocks and pimping out the mother of your? children.
Suggest that you try another subject where your efforts will be tested, you can grow and possibly be appreciated.
Its hot so far!
Damn, can't a man write a hot wife story without some bozo's buzzin' about the morality of it? I mean, this is Literotica isn't it? It's not Psychology Today! It's not a blog or bulletin board either! So people, lay off the put downs.
This story is HOT man, so add some chapters to it and say "to hell" with all these losers!
Great start!
Can't wait for the follow up.
If he is giving permission or helping then she is
NOT CHEATING
Go Go
Well written and I suppose there will be a follow-up. I too am a fairly new writer and can only tell you to write for your own enjoyment and don't pay attention to the ass holes who never have a good word for any story or any writer. They get their jollies out of attacking other people and have neither the talent to write or the guts to give you their name so that you can rebut if it's worth your time. You will find many yellow bellies as long as you write.
Keep going
This "Story" Isn't Worth Reading
I just hope the "writer" gets the psychological analysis and long term therapy so clearly needed. He shouldn't quit his day job either. He's never going to make it as a writer.
Good Story hoping for more
This kind of story is one of my favorites. A couple who together explore their sexuality and the limits of their relationship. For some this is a wonderful journey for others it is a nightmare. The trick is knowing where things are headed before they get out of hand. Your couple is definately heading in the right direction, they are being honest and open and are enjoying the excitement that is caused by it all.
On a side note isn't it amazing the number of up-tight prudes that come to this site. If someone is knocking your work and has never written a story then what the heck do they know. And the ones that comment on the plots of the stories as if they are real life you have to wonder if they have just missed their meds for the day.
Well again great story look forward to seeing where this journey will go, have fun with it.
To the person who talked about therapy ....
Really ? Its not real life, Umm, its like a story ... get real.
NIce, thanks.
Sexy story, thanks. More please, you write well.
I say Evan wants her job and is setting her up.
No woman could be this dumb could she? But isnt really the woman who is dumb it is the husband who quit his job so his wife could be promoted and wasnt good enough to get a good job. Does the little boy feel inadequate and that he has to have wife go out and fuck others to keep from losing her?
..Heather finds a BLACK ADONIS...!!!
...Heather hires a BLACK 13" STALLION as her assistant to travel with her and work with her in her offices..she becomes a BLACK BREEDER VESSEL..a BLACK 'CUM HOLDER..and life changes for hubby!!!..YOU GO GIRL!!!...;-}}}
Gave up after page 1
I gave up after ass hole husband told his wife that it was wonderful that guys were hitting on her. I can see why she got promoted and he did not. Maybe he can get a job as pimp somewhere.
the Ct. Yankee
Great story, thanks
You certainly did well for a first attempt! Very hot stuff, but lots of room for sequels. Pieater
Is Evan just testing the water
Is he trying to see just how far Heather will go and if she will be a fuck toy? Thanks for the story....Rich
Great start!
You can have a lot of fun playing off of what you have written. Have her do her friend a few times and then some other guys.
Someone said this is fantasy not real, to be good
fantasy must be based on reality. People doing irrational things means people are irrational. Translated that means they are mentally off or ill if you prefer. Therapy isnt the answer, medical treatment is. Hopefully sometime before a marriage is destroyed or people get infected with diseases we really dont want to talk about.
WTF is with all the blasting?
I am really confused about why this story is getting bashed so badly. I have read alot of stories on here where the husband is much more of a whimp cuck and they don't get half the BS moral lashing that this story has. This story is actually pretty tame so far. She hasn't even done the guy yet. what are you idiots going to say when she comes home to make hubby eat her creampie? or calls to make him listen etc. I personally think that if you get so upset about this type of story it is because you are very insecure about your own situation. Thy protest to much.
Good start...but
You need to put this story into the voyeur/exhibitionist category. When will you authors realize that this loving wives category draws the readers that condemn this type of behavior? Is this what you want? If writing a live fantasy, put it where those type of readers will go...
Not enuf....
There was not enuf of this story to rate it....
Great Story, would definately like to hear a follow up
Very well-done little story.
This was derrida's only Lit story. Too bad.
The problem...
The problem wasn't this part...Would be to where this story could lead...maybe to divorce...so better end it here
Loser
Evan will show the pictures. Heather WILL end up having sex with him. The Company biggies will find out and want their share and then, she'll have a new life...without you!
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