All Comments on 'Dark Acolyte Ch. 01'

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DocCIS over 16 years ago

Very good!

Very good start and well written. Cannot wait for more!

Anonymousabout 15 years ago

love it

I love this story. I hope to read more stories like it.

Anonymousabout 14 years ago

Part 2 please!

This was very well written. I would like to know what happens next, but perhaps more about the slave girl as well. Also, what was Zerafina's relationship with the warlock? And how old is she?

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All commentary and feedback are welcome (even on the older stories), either in the comments field or via email. I have found that hearing from readers is the greatest inspiration I can hope for. I realize that I left Dar Acolyte languishing for much too long. I'm not sure I e...

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