A recommendation... since you are taking the time to submit a story, I'm assuming you want people to read it.
"Brown Dick" as a name? I stopped reading there. Satire is not an interest of mine.
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Anonymous11/29/07
Magic
How can you take a title with such potential and mess it up? It has to be magic. If you've read one of your stories you've read them all. Characters without personality, motivation or any hope of keeping the reader's attention. The sex scenes remind me of someone who only heard about sex trying to describe it... like a blind man describing the color blue. Do us all a favor and learn more about writing before attempting to place pen to paper. And as a man of color please have a little more respect for yourself and others. There are precious few erotic stories about Blacks, African-Americans and West Indians in Literotica and every time I use story search and put in BLACK, I get your poorly written stuff. Enough already.
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Anonymous02/11/09
S-X serves a purpose
The great thing about this writing is that it sets the floor. Then everyone else can say "well, it's at least better than Samuel X."
English
This story sucked!
This story was really missing something. If you would have listed the athletic program of Georgia Tech, it would've made it a lot better!
Shit brains daily offering
Too bad that it is allowed to submit
Good details
I thought the story was well written and captured the feeling, etc. Not bad.
bad, bad, bad!
stop trying to write erotic stories and stick to engineering
Stopped at line one
A recommendation... since you are taking the time to submit a story, I'm assuming you want people to read it.
"Brown Dick" as a name? I stopped reading there. Satire is not an interest of mine.
Magic
How can you take a title with such potential and mess it up? It has to be magic. If you've read one of your stories you've read them all. Characters without personality, motivation or any hope of keeping the reader's attention. The sex scenes remind me of someone who only heard about sex trying to describe it... like a blind man describing the color blue. Do us all a favor and learn more about writing before attempting to place pen to paper. And as a man of color please have a little more respect for yourself and others. There are precious few erotic stories about Blacks, African-Americans and West Indians in Literotica and every time I use story search and put in BLACK, I get your poorly written stuff. Enough already.
S-X serves a purpose
The great thing about this writing is that it sets the floor. Then everyone else can say "well, it's at least better than Samuel X."
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