All Comments on 'A Christmas Cock'

There was so much that could have been done with the idea. Sorry but this didn't work for me. Maybe others will enjoy the story.

This really could have been a GOOD story ~! Maybe if it was told in the third person without the dialogue. Constant dialogue requires (IMHO) character development and growth (no pun intended). Unfortunately, it was like reading a 70's low-budget porn script without the bad music.

This should be in Humours/Satire. It was HILARIOUS!!!!