There was so much that could have been done with the idea. Sorry but this didn't work for me. Maybe others will enjoy the story.
This really could have been a GOOD story ~! Maybe if it was told in the third person without the dialogue. Constant dialogue requires (IMHO) character development and growth (no pun intended). Unfortunately, it was like reading a 70's low-budget porn script without the bad music.
This should be in Humours/Satire. It was HILARIOUS!!!!
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