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by Liar11/25/07

Nice

"that human fingertips name nothing" Indeed. Nothing is merely something, spread thin.

I didn't quite get the "merciful cool" bit, but still a really enjoyable poem.

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by LeBroz11/26/07

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How the hell do you manage
to turn
astronomical terms into
sensuous concepts

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