All Comments on 'The Last Man in the World Ch. 03'

by MungoParkIII

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
and then.....??????????

The only thing wrong (well, almost) with this series of chapters is that they're each a bit short, but more to the point, the reader is left wondering where the story is going. And as it turns out, and since it appears that the series is finished, then it seems that the story goes....nowhere.

Finish? Draw some sort of conclusion? Do something to take the story line somewhere?

-- KK in Texas

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