I'd like to hear more of Brenda and Martin's relationship.
But it ended too abruptly. I'd like to see a continuation.
Very cute and funny. There gotta be a part 2 of some kind. Interesting because this story the two principle characters had great chemistry and that is a sometimes a rarity around here.
good start need a follow up
I rarely laugh when I'm reading erotica. Bravo!
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Cute Story
I'd like to hear more of Brenda and Martin's relationship.
Agree - it was a cute story
But it ended too abruptly. I'd like to see a continuation.
Very cute and funny. There gotta be a part 2 of some kind. Interesting because this story the two principle characters had great chemistry and that is a sometimes a rarity around here.
good
good start need a follow up
Hilarious!
I rarely laugh when I'm reading erotica. Bravo!
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