All Comments on 'A Hot Night in Lanzerote'

by Tiberius58

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
W.T.F.

More Shit!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Why even bother to take her home?

She would be a useless piece of shit now. Stretched beyond belief, a real whore getting paid 500 E for sex. And in such and environment, full of STDS if not AIDS. Let her stay as a whore and divorce her upon arrival home. Or is this husband really a butch making out as a man?

knickerlessalwaysknickerlessalwaysover 16 years ago
Come off it you two

It was only a story. Why do some people always believe everything they read? This author had a story in his head and he wrote it, so why condemn him for that? I wish I was his wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
So she was the love of her life

I have one word for him..Wimp. well no make that two words: add dumbass...no three words:add dumbass...no I already said that...well how about a word for her...whore...How about a bigger word divorced whore...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wimps Will Love This "Story"

...but men with their manhood intact will not. Judge yourself by your reaction to this run-of-the-mill wimp husband slut/whore wife "story."

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
to love is not to own.

my wife and i visited an underground club whilst we were on a holiday in thailand. during our visit, the club was holding a wet t-shirt contest. as game as my wife, she entered the contest with my consent. unexpectedly, she won. as a token of appreciation to all patrons who had voted for her, she completely strip of her wet t-shirt and paraded in the nude on stage. i was taken aback by her brasenness but applauded nonetheless. shortly afterwards, she was led backstaged where she would have to wait for her prize winning presentation which would take place in an hours time. after about ten minutes, i decided to join her backstage but she was nowhere to be found. a bouncer backstage told me that my wife had been brought to the manager's office and then kindly brought me there. the door to the office was slightly ajar, so, i entered. the sight that greeted me,gave me an instant hard on. there, lying on the manager's table, was my sweet wife. she had both feet spread wide and was being hardfuck by a thai man whose dick seemed to be at least 2" longer and much much thicker than mine. my wife was moaning in ectasy with his every stroke and even spur him to cum inside which he does hapilly. my wife then introduced the man as the manager of the club and told me that we had been invited to a private party on a yacth. we left after the prize presentation together with the manager. upon arrival on the yacth, only did i realise that my wife is the only woman onboard. the party was organised by expats, comprising of white and black men. there are a total of 45 men, and all, inclusive of the club manager and me was treated to a wonderful suck and fuck party.it was really an awesome sight to watch my wife pussy,ass and mouth being fuck at the same time. at times, her pussy was penetrated by two dicks at the same time. my wife was really used but she seemed to enjoy it.when we left the yacth two days later, my wife was so sore that she can't even walk straight. that was our first experienced and her first to be fuck by a man (men) other than me.although amongst all the men, my dick was the smallest and shortest, i just don't care. what matters to me most is she had enjoyed the experienced and is happy about it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
re: Come off it you two

By that "logic", since it's only a story any praise is also pointless.

HarryHaversackersHarryHaversackersover 16 years ago
I beg to differ...

I beg to differ with my friend below who said "Wimps will love this 'story'" He has it ass backwards. Guys, manly men, will read this story, and most others on this site, and enjoy them, and not give a damn about comments like his, because they are secure with their sexuality, and have no doubts about their masculinity, unlike...

HarryHaversackersHarryHaversackersover 16 years ago
I beg to differ...

I beg to differ with my friend below who said "Wimps will love this 'story'" He has it ass backwards. Guys, manly men, will read this story, and most others on this site, and enjoy them, and not give a damn about comments like his, because they are secure with their sexuality, and have no doubts about their masculinity, unlike...

BazzzBazzzover 16 years ago
Harry has it right

Funny how the same idiots complain about this type of story over and over. Yet they read every word of it before they write their negative drivel. These guys live alone because no woman would be interested in a Troglodyte. Even if they are lucky enough to meet a woman, how long before she is stepping out on such a boring insecure lout. So Harry not only are these mutants insecure, they more than likely have lived through something akin to this type of story and can't stand the self examination.

As for the story itself, I normally don't like short stories as they usually don't have much of a plot. This one was different. I liked it as the writer got right to the point.

KlausTheMausKlausTheMausalmost 15 years ago
I'm not a wimp,

and I don't love it either. Too much of a grandad fantasy, and absolutely implausible.

roscovichroscovichabout 13 years ago
Hmmm.... Tiberius..... Tiberius...

Why don't you try Gluteus Maximus ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great fun

We go to Gran Canaria and get my girlfriend gangbanged in Secrets swinger club in The Cita Centre!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

While we were away in Germany, my wife Lorraine and I decided to visit a adult cabaret, and it was adult. As well as the acts they held contests during the night between the acts. One contest was best legs, now Lorraine even at 56 has great legs, first prize was 250 euro, I encouraged her to enter, she was reluctant but hey,250 euro just for showing your legs. Eight women got up, they were behind a thigh high curtain, only their legs showing, the compere walked behind each and pointed, applause next, the loudest applause won. They called it a draw between all of them, clearly by the applause it was not but it was part of the game. All right ladies, we will have to work out something else, hesitation, I will raise the prize money to 500 euro, if you wish to stay we will raise the curtain higher and we will see which ladies derriere gets the most applause. To my surprise, not one lady left, more to my surprise Lorraine stayed. O.k., here we go, it was a beautiful sight, they were asked to lift their dresses/skirts 8 ladies panty covered bottoms, 2 with a string on display, applause for each. I must say, besides Lorraines bottom, there were 2 others which caused my cock to stir. The host said I will have to confer, he walked off stage, all, the while the ladies on display. He came back, well it has never happened before, another draw, there was loud applause. We have decided to raise the prize money to 1000 euro, if you want to stay, you will have to lower your panties and display your derriere in which ever way you feel fit. 3 of the ladies left, Lorraine stayed. Down to 5, lets make it easier, as 5 large padded benches were brought out, ladies we will lower the curtain, if you kneel on the benches it will make our job easier. All right, the lights went out and very bright lights were focused on the curtain, it was lifted, what a sight, 5 ladies kneeling on all fours, their bottoms exposed, their pussies also exposed. Lorraine, completely shaved, moving slightly back and forward, I think that did it for her because as she did her pussy stayed slightly parted. She won to very much applause. The stage was emptied, I waited for her. Then the compere, our next act involves every school boys fantasy, a teacher, a classroom. To our delight our winner has agreed to help us with this act. I nearly fell off my seat. I watched a male teacher, sitting alone in the room, a knock, come in, a woman in a very short school uniform entered. Yes, I need to talk to you about my grades, the show went on, how could they be better,he said they cant, you must leave, she got up but dropped her books onto the floor, she bent over in front of him, her pussy and arse on display. He moved over to help her and before long his very large cock was in her mouth, then he sat her on the desk, his cock spearing into her pussy as she squeezed her breasts.I look around, some cocks are being stroked, some "ladies" are heads down .Back at the door, my wife, the headmistress stopped and sees them, lifting her dress, fingering her pussy as they fucked, she leans against the door making a noise they see her, she tries to cover up. He grabs her, pulls her to the table, lifting her skirt, feeling her pussy then lay her back on the large padded desk, pushing the young womans head down to her pussy, then pushing his cock back into the young woman, fucking her with long strokes. I thought the woman licking Lorraine was an act but no you could clearly see her tongue moving along her pussy, I was hard, I pulled my cock out, oh , I watched as Lorraine guided the womans head, just like she did mine, I felt movement in the seat next to me,, a hand to my cock, I looked over, it was a guy slowly stroking me now, I looked back up, my wifes legs were holding the womans head, she did this to me when she orgasmed and she was, the guys head went to my lap, I didn't care, his lips moving up and down my cock as the guy on stage pulled out and moved to my wifes breasts and face covering her in cum as my hand went to the guys head holding it as my cum shot powerfully into his mouth. The curtain went down, I let go of the guys head, he kept sucking, so good, then as the lights brightened he lifted his head, I hurriedly put my cock back as he got up and said Danke or something and walked away. My wife returned, looked up at me, I smiled and nodded, was it good, she just nodded and said take me to our hotel and fuck me. It was a 15 minute walk, as soon as we got in she lifted her skirt and lay back on the bed,legs wide apart, I moved between them, warm, wet, that's it give it to me, yes, yes and she orgasmed, I pulled back, get on your knees, I think I want to fuck your prize winning arse.. we both liked anal, for different reasons, me because of the tightness and watching my cock slide in and out of her clinging hole, her because it made her feel slutty and used but tonight it was sheer lust as my cock opened her and pushed into her parting depths as her hand worked her pussy to orgasm causing my cock to coat her insides with what cum I had left. We slept.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
whore

what a whore. she needs to be let loose for all to fuck at will

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