All Comments on 'A Casual Exchange of Gunfire'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
very entertaining!

This is a thoroughly entertaining story, and well-written (a few minor writing flaws, but let's not quibble). I loved the twist in the ending.

-- KK in Texas

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
very good except one thing

Needs more steamy sex, but otherwise well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
ichi-ban

bolshoi horisho story, gaijin

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Domo arigato, Go-hati-sama!

On a scale of 1 to ten, this rates an "oh my God..."

The title got me hooked, and I wasn't disappointed. Reading it, a voice like a young, Blade Runner-esque Harrison Ford kept narrating it in my mind. Loved the detail, the pacing... with just enough sex in the story to keep it from a "Non-Erotic" rating in Literotica, I never once rolled my eyes or felt like reaching for an editor's red pen as I so often do here.

Once again confirming my conviction that Literotica is more a writer's workshop than anything else. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Well, words speak for themselves

The story is not bad but there are a few mistakes that should have been taken care off before posting

JhyrJhyralmost 15 years ago
Nicely violent story :-)

I liked the setting of the story. Reminded me a bit of "Shadowrun" with a bit more sex thrown in.

Since I don't know a great deal about Japan I can't really say accurate the description of Japanese criminals or geishas were.

To those who complained about the descriptions of the girl's fascination with a "big American cock"... it's a FANTASY, lol!

If you're looking for realism, I think the literotica Sc-Fi/Fantasy section might just be the wrong place to look...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Beautiful futuristic writing. I could really visualize it. This would make a great video game. :D

calckidcalckidalmost 11 years ago
Most awesome title ever

Talk about saying a lot with a few words!

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