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Loved the Backstory!!!
Thanks. Didn't expect the backstory of jas & Todd but loved it!!! If you ever get the feel, love to see the wedding and Tod meeting the family!!
I think my monitor is actually smoking
This was hot. 'Nuff said.
Thank You!!!!!
Thanks for the backstory...it was hot, and I liked reading how they actually got together!!! I agree, if you feel the need to write one of the wedding I would be interested in reading it...no pressure! LOL!
Great story!
Loved it!
Dialogue lacked something
The dialogue lack sensuality. It started out fine then turned out to be too crass and ghetto sounding. The story line wasn't bad though.
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