All Comments on 'Sarah's First Bikini'

I loved it! Very sexy!

I really enjoy your writing. I also like reading about good spankings. Your writing is so creative and this story is very sexy.

As a woman reading your story, I liked it! More than I thought I would. Parts that made me initially slightly uncomfortable later turned me on. The way you hint about something but never verify it is great work! Leaves the imagination to go wild! My ONLY negative with this story Is seemingly the abrupt ending. I think the ending/closing could use just a little more thought and connection to other story elements.