All Comments on 'Sarah Gets Converted'

No one can be permanently encased in anything rubber or otherwise. To much goes in and out thru the pores of the body. The girls anus was sealed in the suit as specified in the article, where does her waste go? The fantasy is real and many girls really do enjoy being ponygirls full or part time. I think perhaps you nees some real experience in the field of play. The latex fetish is also real, I enjoy the Texas Latex Party, but many ponygirls are not outfitted in rubber at all but in leather and some are for the most part trained and work nude.

It is a fantasy! Sometimes I am amazed at the people who criticize a story "because it just can't happen." Star Trek has been on TV for over thirty years and the number one premise of the show is that faster than light travel is possible. Reading fiction will be more enjoyable for most people when they willingly suspend their disbelief while they read.

I loved this short story because it involved a lot of imaginative ideas. This site is for exactly that, imagination. The first comment I read brought up some very good points regarding the realism of having an anus covered with rubber forever, how would the body breathe with it covered in rubber, etc. Yet if that's how you want your women to be in your story than so be it or better yet learn from that comment and in the second part explain how these realistic problems are overcome in your fantasy. That's what the critism was originally meant for on this site. Unfortunately there are abuser our there that have pretty much ruined it for the writers with their moronic comments. My rules for my stories are quite simple. If you write a comment and won't leave your name so that the writer has access to an email then you forfeit your right to have your comment kept at the bottom of the story. Whether the comment is good or bad critism or just one of those donkey statements their is no responsibility by the author to keep it published tey can simply delete with no explanation. Negative statements for the sake of being negative should also go the way of the buffalo. As for my criticism of your story I would have liked to see some more plot developed. Don't be afraid to hold a story back and get some more detail in there. If you can combine this sort of story development with your imagination you'll be one of the better writers on this site. And please, don't let the critics get to you. If they do leave their names you will often find that they don't even have their own stories they just like to spread stupidity.

Hi Sarahcheer. I love your vignettes! Thank you.

Hay Saracheer, I am fascinated in your fantasy world. I am not interested in the people with no imagination. This is fantasy and well written. Before coming across your writing I had no idea about pony girls so after some research I see where you are coming. Keep giving stories like this.

Hay Saracheer, I am fascinated in your fantasy world. I am not interested in the people with no imagination. This is fantasy and well written. Before coming across your writing I had no idea about pony girls so after some research I see where you are coming. Keep giving stories like this.

such a naughty little maid!

It had promise, esp the permanent rubber dip but was rushed at the end and the town allowing pony girls was a little rediculous.

I ORGASEMED \SO HARD TO THIS!