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Doing the Nines

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by lorencino11/26/07

Bravo

A fun poem that hints teasingly at the ecstasy that awaits the dedicated novice who practices the ancient techniques with diligence. I like the way the various techniques are used to create the light-hearted rhythm of the novice practicing his scales which contrasts with the hint of the final purpose of these exercises.

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by dominateme112/22/07

Fun poem. The author catches the sensuality, power and rhythmn of the "nines" with his words. Nice!

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