All Comments on 'Father Uses Huge Asset Ch. 23'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Oh Fuck!!!

I thought this author and this shitty assed story had maybe died. Oh well, no such luck...

fumundacheezefumundacheezeover 16 years ago
Ready Set Go for it.

acdd123 is ready for some more L O W scores. Wish there was a "less than Zero" bui there is not.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
YUCK

PLEASE PLEASE STOP. THESE "STORIES" MAKE NO SENSE . BESIDES NO PARENT WOUKD DO THAT TO THEIR OWN CHILD.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

If you think no parent would do this to a child, you are not reading papers and if you don't believe me, go talk to your local public prosecutor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I 2nd that

I had hoped this dipshit had got hit by a truck or something...no luck sigh. Just another one of those people like JPB and smaulX whos names you dont even want to see next to the author section.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Ridiculous exagerations and bad prose

Disgusting story, full of grammar and spelling mistakes i.e. Richard EXPODED lolol (look out it's gonna blow!) as well as truly horrible prose filled with ridiculous exagerations...her face is covered in cum, walls are covered in cum, everything is covered in cum. That's not a cock, it's a hose, "raining men" has taken a new meaning...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Look I realize that this is just a story but even

in a story someone would've had a man who was this big a bastard castrated. The fucker has to sleep sometime, restrain him, chop off his balls, and whammo problem solved.

Duuude69Duuude69over 16 years ago
Continue

What the others fail to realize is that this is fantasy! Not meant to be realistic. This is rather typical for a cuckold fantasy. A confident, strong, masculine, well-hung man fucking and impregnating the wife of a much smaller, less-hung, wimp of a man. The others need to lighten up and get in the spirit of the story. If it's so continually awful, why do they keep reading each new chapter? You're doing great. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great Cuck Theme

Don't listen to these retards. When I want to read a realistic story about legitimate characters and believable plot lines I don't go to a site called "Literotica". I read a "book".

This is great stuff, the blatant humiliation of this poor guy is outstanding.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Needs to be a little more realistic

First of all i just cant see a parent doing something like that to their child i know it's just a story but you are making it out to be a fairy tale,fifteen inch cock...puh leeez

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
In need of psychiatric help

You are a sick, demented freak! You must have some seriously fucked up daddy issues for a 12 year old. Get some help, you need it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Dont really know why anyone would have an objectio

about the story line involving so many characters with mental illnesses. The father in real life would have been killed by one of the women long ago. The wife comes across as an imbecile. The son is obviously hated by the father. Maybe the baby's head was to large and he cant feel his wife when he fucks her and he hates the son for ruining her. Several of the girls in the story were bound to have gotten pregnant and sued for child support and other things. And you simply dont fuck they many people without acquing some nice medical issues including the gift that keeps giving, AIDS.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Bullshit

I dont understand how the big titted women are able to take a monster like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This story needs o more hard action

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DeucalionGreenDeucalionGreenover 4 years ago
I think about this story way too much!

It's true. I was thinking about it last night at work it takes up an alarming amount of mental real estate.

I find it hard to feel sorry for Martin. I keep waiting for him get a clue and do something drastic. Like, I don't know... actually make a decent attempt at patricide... convincingly fake his own death and frame Richard for the murder... find a woman who can't have intercourse with normal sized men because it is painful (they are out there)... resign himself to a life of celibacy or self love or whatever ... anything but continue taking this crap from a parent who is not in any way shape or form a parent.

I actually like reading about cuckoldry from the POV of the bull. Richard is an awesome example and I have analyzed him way too much for it to be healthy. I kept thinking last night (while I was working) that he's way too invested in his self-image as the alpha of alphas. I kind of think if Martin *had* been an actual rival in terms of cock size and general virility he'd have tried to have him killed like the wicked queen in Snow White. In fact one of the Kim's or Vicky's kids should become a teenage stud in a few years and this should happen. It would be awesome.

Cheers for a great story mate.

DeucalionGreenDeucalionGreenover 4 years ago
I think about this story way too much!

It's true. I was thinking about it last night at work it takes up an alarming amount of mental real estate.

I find it hard to feel sorry for Martin. I keep waiting for him get a clue and do something drastic. Like, I don't know... actually make a decent attempt at patricide... convincingly fake his own death and frame Richard for the murder... find a woman who can't have intercourse with normal sized men because it is painful (they are out there)... resign himself to a life of celibacy or self love or whatever ... anything but continue taking this crap from a parent who is not in any way shape or form a parent.

I actually like reading about cuckoldry from the POV of the bull. Richard is an awesome example and I have analyzed him way too much for it to be healthy. I kept thinking last night (while I was working) that he's way too invested in his self-image as the alpha of alphas. I kind of think if Martin *had* been an actual rival in terms of cock size and general virility he'd have tried to have him killed like the wicked queen in Snow White. In fact one of the Kim's or Vicky's kids should become a teenage stud in a few years and this should happen. It would be awesome.

Cheers for a great story mate.

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