All Comments on 'Words'

by Xantu

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Invisible2uInvisible2uover 16 years ago
Very Beautiful...

and extremely erotic. Sometimes, just the look in someone's eyes and the feel of their body can tell you more than words ever could. Loved this one.

gem28gem28over 15 years ago
give and take

liked reading both POV's, both he and she are enslaved to the other.very basic,very nice.annay

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Wow

Good writing. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
purge thought.....for this moment or for ever?

So does he ever listen to actual words and want her to have thoughts or is she only to be a mindless fucktoy worshipping him? The scene is wonderful if it is part of something greater. It is sad and cardboard if that is all it is. I wish we knew which.....

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