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Swing Time Ch. 05

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by NorCalGirl12/11/07

Hmmmm, Allie and David huh?

Well, in the aftermath of such an event, it's not surprising that he proposed and she accepted. But they're high school seniors, with college ahead of them. It will be interesting to see if they actually get engaged after things calm down.

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by 12/11/07

Back to being Wonderful

This was a great chapter, full of action and suspense. I'm still not o.k. with the student/teacher relationship but we'll see where it goes.

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by Anonymous12/11/07

This guy Jake is obviously a Major Asshole

I quit reading after a few lines of him

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by gemman111/05/12

You are a fantastic story teller. Keep up the good work,

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