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How right you are.
Completely crackers. Well done!
Well...
Damn Freddie, kind of twisted, but I liked it. And a Merry Christmas to you too. Thanks. **Your Fan Vick**
Great story...
Can't deny that i loved it... it was a top story... unfortunatly i have to agree with one of the other commenters... not quite sure it fit this catagory... but all in all... LOVED IT! :)
Hey Freddie---
Truly creepy, but, hey that was your intention, eh? Certainly not your typical Christmas tale. lol Well done. That's what writings all about: taking us to places where we may never have gone before. Cheryl aka daffyduck
SAD
But Christmas is so sad for some,Its shows your ability Freddie to deal with almost any subject.Jimbo
Good story
This story flowed beautifully. You hooked me from beginning to end, that's a story.
Very good but twisted
Damn Freddie another wait and see what happens at the end. Excellent work as per usual. Keep up the great work. Fred :)))
wow
it's a pleasure to read u, i've just discovered u..keep up the good work, please.
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sounds like someone illiterate.. I guess that's why he thinks this story is crap (guess who this is Freddie :)
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