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Finally!
Thank you so very much for finally writing something sexy but....no, BECAUSE it is very human, very dear, very alive, and real, and fun, and intelligent.
Welcome back
Intelligent, honest, sexy. Real as life.
Damned good job and I can see you in the whole thing.
Beautiful
Great story. Wonderful writing, so evocative! You paint a very vivid picture with your words, SJ.
Need more!
Need some more of this couple. Your story is a pleasure to read. Thanks for the story.
Wonderful
This was a great story. The characters were great although flipping back and forth between points of view was a little confusing. Can't wait to read more.
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Simply wonderful. Great characters, super story and beautifully written. SJ, a really enjoyable piece - thanks for sharing.
Beautiful story- nice writing
Congratulations! You write a beautiful story. The characters are real and interesting and the plot is wonderfully developed. I don't know any Bi Women but I'm beginning to think,based on my limited experience, that Bi woman write extremely well.
60 year old George
Welcome back, baby...
It was wonderful to read this. I enjoyed the characters and the situations, although I must admit that I, like Tex, couldn't help but picture you. I hope you don't mind. *wink*
I really hope the feedback and the validation feed your muse. I want more from you.
wow, awesome !!
what a great story .. so real, excellent dialogue, and I luv how you switch POV .. when can we xpect part 2 ??
Captured me
Captured me and never let me go again. Great work!
Loved It
Nicely written, wonderfully told. I was riveted. Your story was interesting, stimulating and sexual. Sophie is a woman of any man's dreams. Is Sophie you, Sophia Jane?
I knew I loved you!
Great story, SJ.
I just wish it were longer. A few more twists and turns before the final emotional consummation.
Of course, you may have that lined up for future episodes. I hope so.
Whether or not, you deserve that prize.
Thank you
Thank you, I read it and sported wood.
very, very good!
keep on writing!
Felix
LOVED IT
Love strong smart women, very hot, too....
Fine writing
about real people. I wondered at first about the first-to-third person switch, but it worked. A most accomplished piece. Thank you.
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