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Just Trying To Help Pt. 01

byDG Hear©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/04/07

As Usual

As usual, EXCELLENT!!

Prof. Ramstein

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by PEATBOG12/04/07

Off to a great start!!!!

Well DG, a truly excellent story so far. Enough said! Pete.

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by Anonymous12/04/07

Thank goodness

It is always great to see your name among the new stories,
especially in the loving wives category. Another very
well written tale; can't wait for part 2.

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by Anonymous12/04/07

Thanks DG

I love reading stories in which the husband isn't some mental basket case. Perhaps it reminds me too much of what I am trying to change from. The thing about stories is, and especially sex stories, is that if you ever read anything that you never get anything from for your mind, then you have wasted your time. I have read words of wisdom from writers of special force kill them all dead writers and I have also gotten this from writers of children's ficton. Needless to say I got some of that from your story. But what I got mostly was that love can come in any form and if you just wait then good things will happen. It was also good to know that someone else gets pissed at these other dumb ass stories where the husband has him brain in backward and the wife has a big (Holland Tunnel big) that always needs a black or over sized cock.

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by cageytee12/04/07

Here I am visiting friends north of the border.

We're up to our collective asses in snow and as a guest I felt obligated to help shovel at least some of it from the drive and sidewalk. I'm wet and cold , sore and uncomfortable. In all, it has been a shitty day but now, having come on-line and finding a new DG Hear story has completely turned my day around. Reading a DG Hear story always makes my day a good one. I'm already looking forward to tomorrow and the next installment.

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by bornagain12/04/07

Thanks Alot DG

DG I LOved that story i guess he was so scared she would be like Julie that he was being to careful as not to upset her but I hope you continue with the story what ever did happen to Julie anyway did she ever get remarried ?
Pat

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by daluent12/04/07

Awesome!

Another great effort from my favorite writer. You have a unique ability to see things in black and white without any confusion. Please keep entertaining us. Can't wait for the next part. Luis

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by Anonymous12/05/07

Interesting beginning.

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by DG Hear12/05/07

ThankYou!

Thank you for the nice comments. Part 2 (final part) is submitted and will hopefully be posted tomorrow. I really do appreciate the feedback. I guess it's one of the things that keep writers going. I know it does me.
Much appreciated.
DG Hear

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by Anonymous12/05/07

Love your stories DG

Another great DG story and looking forward to Part II.Keep up the great writings DG. We always look forward to reading them! ! !

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by peggytwitty12/05/07

A very well done LW / Romance

Another of your good stories now turning towards the romance side. Thank you for the entertainment again.PT

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by Anonymous12/06/07

Great

You write excellent stories and I like others look for them. I look forward to part 2. Thank you for your efforts.

Roger

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by JakeRivers12/06/07

There you go...

stopping at a cliffhanger moment. Some authors will do anything to get us to read the next chapter!

Great story, DG.

Julie got what she deserved. Both Kim and Molly are great characters.

Just a good, old fashioned love story.

Regards, Jack

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by KOLKORE12/08/07

We get two for one!

A hybrid of a Loving Wives story, then a Romance tale for a contrast. Not too many things are better than enjoying a heart warming tale like yours on a snowy day...thanks, yet again.
Now for the next part!

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by bruce2211/09/10

Happy Story

I did not remember this one from its title but it is a fine reread....

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by tazz31709/28/11

WHERE DO NICE GUYS FINISH

or how to score and be a human. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Drbeamer333305/20/13

Enjoyed it

I look forward to seeing where this story leads.

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by betrayedbylove08/04/13

Great Tale

Everyone should have a guardian angel such as our hero. I hope things work out. On to ch. 2.

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by TheNextGuy03/03/14

****

A very enjoyable story.

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by Anonymous06/07/14

Returning

I read this story years ago and LOVED IT and am revisiting it now yay ^_^

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by Jack9906/29/14

Love the story

But I never understood why he needed a van to carry his computer repair tools. Surely a #2 phillips screwdriver and (possibly) some needle nose pliers would fit in his car.

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by Anonymous07/06/14

1* for Chap. 1, 5* for Chap. 2 (& Pt. 02) = 3.

Pure wishful thinking about the lawsuit and the terms of the divorce, plus I liked Ann better than the protanganist. A completely different protanganist showed up for Chapter 2. Odd that a divorce such as this would make him a completely different (and better) person.

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by tazz31707/06/14

HELP THE MOST MISUNDERSTOOD WORD

it has so may crooks and crannies, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by krosis66608/18/14

A little far fetched

A strange guy approaches a woman at a gas station, asking all sorts of questions about her kids, and she just hands them over for the night? In reality she would run screaming for someone to help her because a pervert is trying to get her kids!

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by KarenE11/15/14

Huh?

She's never given him any indication she thinks of him as anything more than a "guardian angel", they go on ONE date where he treats her with total respect, and she's going to leave because he didn't sweep her off her feet?

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by krosis66609/01/15

He was in a very tricky situation with Molly

I can see his thinking. When she accepted the date, he had to ask himself, did she go out with him merely out of gratitude and politeness? He would second guess his every move, and second guess her every response. Does she like me, or is she just humouring me, out of gratitude? Everytime she smiled at him, he would convince himself that she is just being nice, that she could never like him. Everytime he second guessed himself, and held back, Molly would tell herself that he is a nice guy, but that he doesn't like her that way, even though the opposite was true. The only way out of that situation, is for one or both of them to overcome their fear of rejection and fear of being embarrassed, and just tell the other the truth about how they feel.
BTW, those two Raggedy redhead twins, Ann and Andy, seem vaguely familiar.....

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by Anonymous09/11/15

Damn women!

They expect guys to be mind readers and then get pissed when they aren't. Men are from Mars, women are from venus.

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