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Good so far. I'd like to see this story continue.
Writing more.
So, you like the story, want to see it continued, but give it a ranking of 50? What am I missing here, where is the encouragement to have the story continue when you basically state with your rating the story is average? Would think the best way to encourage an author if you like their work, is to reward them with a score above average.
Superb. Can't wait for the next installment!
tell us more
Please tell us what happens next. Your story is perfect for me because I'm such a cock-sucker who loves to service a Daddy. I love that they kiss because it is so hot to kiss a Daddy. Too many stories have Daddies just dominate but in your story when they kiss it made me so hard.
I want to hear what happens next -- I expect that Daddy fucks your ass, just like my Daddy does to me.
wow! keep 'em coming
fantastic story! I hope you write a dozen more chapters! Thanks!
Great story!!! Can't wait to read more!!
Your Words Make Me Hard and Hopeful
Oh, please, please pleasure me with two of three more chapters.
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